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acollapsngdream

Safe & Sound 2/2

Dec 28, 2012 22:44

( Part II )

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unplugged32 December 30 2012, 13:40:13 UTC

Great premise, loved the characters, fantastic!

acollapsngdream December 31 2012, 14:37:25 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

z3s_keep_going December 30 2012, 18:03:13 UTC

this was great! loved it.

candygramme December 31 2012, 07:14:28 UTC

Oh, that was awesome! Thank you so much. I love Jensen the debonair safe cracker, and cheered when he managed to open the Soco within the hour, doing it the old fashioned way. His dad would have been proud. I hope JD was loaded down with chains and dragged away to penal servitude for a very long time. I haven't read any of your writing before, but I am definitely going to take a look at other stuff you've done. This was great.

Thank you.

acollapsngdream December 31 2012, 15:37:54 UTC

You're very welcome! I'm so relieved glad that you enjoyed it. It's always a little nervewracking writing for someone else. You're prompts were fun and I had a hard time deciding which one to write. I like to think JD is locked away in a supermax somewhere. ;) I'm flattered you liked it enough to check out more of my writing, but this is the only (fandom) thing I've managed to finish in a long time. I'm sorry you had to wait so long for it. I hope you had a good holiday have a Happy New Year! :)

acollapsngdream December 31 2012, 14:38:08 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad! :)

marlowe78 January 1 2013, 00:19:37 UTC

I really liked this! Also liked the Italian Job, but I honestly didn't find that quote... Might of course be because I watched it not in English ;-)

Good job, thanks for sharing this.

acollapsngdream January 1 2013, 01:39:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The quote I stole was one of Charlize Theron's lines: "He took my father from me, I'm taking this." It's a pretty generic quote I guess. Maybe not as obvious as I thought it was. While I was watching the movie, it just sort of grabbed me and it fit well in this story. So, I stole it. ;)

zara_zee January 1 2013, 00:53:01 UTC

Great fun! Suspenseful and engaging. Had me on the edge of my seat. :)

acollapsngdream January 1 2013, 01:57:53 UTC

Thank you! :) I'm happy you thought so. It's hard to tell when you're writing it, but I had fun with it.

deanshot January 14 2013, 22:39:45 UTC

This was brilliant, loved how you wrote it and how well it flowed.
Thankfully Jensen was okay at the end and he has Jared with him so a double bonus.
Thanks for sharing.
*hugs*

acollapsngdream January 15 2013, 16:44:36 UTC

I'm so happy to hear you thought it flowed well, that was something I was striving for as I wrote it. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)