Excellent story! I was pleasantly surprised that it didn't go the expected plot of Jensen trying to hide his problem from Jared. And I liked the snappy dialog between Jensen and Chris and Jensen and Jared.
Thank you! Honestly, it never crossed my mind to have Jensen hide it, so I'm glad that was unexpected. And I'm relieved you thought the dialogue was snappy. I've always thought it was my weakness. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading/commenting!
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great job!!
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