I'm on a roll now - it's all go.

Jan 16, 2010 00:07


Title: Shur'tugalar Rïsa.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin, a bit of Arthur/Gwen, and a bit of Gwen/Lancelot, even a bit of Merlin/Morgana. Later on, anyway.
Warnings: Violence, dragons, elves, magic. Y'know, fantasy stuff.
Spoiler(s): Nope. None at all.
Word count: 3913 for this chapter.
Rating: PG. At the moment, anyway. Different chapters may change.
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frames_in_aria January 17 2010, 00:22:33 UTC
D'awww... So cute ♥ Loved the fact that they can comfort each other, Arthur for Merlin's loneliness, and Merlin for Arthur's insecurities :)

Also, poor Arthur for the burn, but at least Merlin is there to make it all better.

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adeina_rhyddha January 17 2010, 00:26:40 UTC
This chapter was kind of made of fluff, I admit.
That bit...and the line...and...IDEK. It came from nowhere and I loved it - which is saying something as I so rarely love anything I write - and I just had to throw it in. Plus, Arthur is more insecure that he lets on. They have to comfort each other, because each other is all they have.
Besides Aravae and Vesparr, of course. x3
That...was planned. I feel bad for hurting him, but hey, it was kinda fun. Well, to write, anyhow.
And there is always Merlin around to play doctor. xD
Thanks for the lovely comment, and I'm glad you are still liking it.

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book_worm_vicky January 17 2010, 17:32:26 UTC
Just have to say, the icon at the top of this, brilliant! 'Kay, I'm late again, aren't I? Sorry.

I think the description of the feast and the way the elves acted around Merlin was really good, and I loved how Arthur could see Merlin was unhappy, but didn't want to embarrass Merlin and so went through Aravae to talk to him.

"..You never look lonely when you are with me.” <--- THIS! OMG WOW! My grin is ridiculously big right now. I really, really adored this, in fact all of Merlin and Arthur's discussion after the feast was amazing! I love how Arthur can see right through Merlin, and can comfort him so well. I love how close they're becoming, don't even have words. Just wow ( ... )

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adeina_rhyddha January 17 2010, 19:24:23 UTC
Thanks. I've used it before. Figured it was only fitting ( ... )

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book_worm_vicky January 22 2010, 20:23:52 UTC
Damn my internet! They told me it was fixed, the liars! They have said it's fixed again, so hopefully they're telling the truth this time ( ... )

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adeina_rhyddha January 22 2010, 20:31:45 UTC
Awww. Hopefully it's sorted now. x3 ( ... )

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archaeologist_d January 18 2010, 13:12:29 UTC
I loved that Arthur picked up on Merlin's loneliness. Poor guy. I also liked that Arthur has insecurities and Merlin was able to make him feel better.

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adeina_rhyddha January 18 2010, 17:22:41 UTC
Merlin, bless him, doesn't have many friends anymore. You're right - poor guy.
Arthur is incredibly insecure, he is just manly-manly and doesn't like to admit to it. I kind of see him like that in the show, too, so I kind of played on that.
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the comment. x3

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moulinmeerkat January 18 2010, 15:53:21 UTC
I seriously cannot explain how much I love this story. Every time there is a new chapter I dance around the room before sitting down to read it. *snuggles it*

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adeina_rhyddha January 18 2010, 17:23:42 UTC
Really? x3
Aw, thank you. I'm flattered.
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up, though. Exams next week, so I'm pretty much in Major Panic Mode right now. xD
After that, though, they should come more steadily again.

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mychaostheorem January 24 2010, 09:32:24 UTC
Hmm I think I missed this or something! Sorry, not sure what happened... then I come back after a couple of days and omg you really ARE on a roll, you've written so much! Exams over then I suppose?

This is the first chapter I've read since finishing all the books and I was just getting withdrawal symptoms before I read this -but this story is like nicotine patchs, I think I'm addicted :P! This chapter was really fun (except poor Arthur!) and i really like being transported to your world :D

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adeina_rhyddha January 24 2010, 10:08:41 UTC
!!!
I wondered where you had been!
I have written rather a lot. My exams are not over yet, no, I just got lots of ideas all at once and I can't concentrate when that happens.
I've not really been writing desperatly long things - either my crack or my smut is the longest thing I've written since this - but yeah. I spent ages not writing anything and then three ideas leapt at me at once. O.o
Aw. Thank you. x3
Lawl. Poor Arthur. He gets picked on in this fic something chronic, doesn't he? xDD
Thanks. I'm glad you still like it so much.

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mychaostheorem January 24 2010, 12:19:42 UTC
haha yeah I'm moving out (to another state, I'M SO EXCITED)... So yeah... But I can't believe you still have exams! Not that I'm chastising you or anything -I'm just amazing you can write so much/so well in the middle of that!

Thanks heaps for this series (even if Arthur is always picked on) and for introing me to the books >_<

btw, I forgot to ask before... who is it that married Arya 10 years ago last chapter?

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adeina_rhyddha January 24 2010, 15:47:55 UTC
Wow, awesome.
Yeah, I do.
I am a bad person.
I write in my breaks. Honest, I do. It's how I get it done.
It's not well written, though. xDD
I do feel sorry for him, the poor sap. But ah well.
You are very welcome. Everyone should read them. xD
Halflar. Some random elf.
It shall all become clear, Little One, do not worry yourself.

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