FIC--Interruption

[adjovi]

Title: Interruption
Rating: NC-17 (mentions of sex, so being safe)
Spoilers: Torchwood COE, thru Day One
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Characters: Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Sue Baker
Summary: Ianto’s POV of the date at the French restaurant
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

A/N: Thank you for the mad beta fu to

Comments

[blue_fjords]

Dude, I totes love their easy banter. I shall be dreaming of Jack/Ianto conversing over mouth-watering French food tonight.

I can't wait for the final bit! I <3 you!

[adjovi]

I <3 you!

ok...i I <3 you!, even if i don't know what that means. thanks again, honey. you rock whatever kasbah you are inhabiting, and i totes need to write the next part for you.

[blue_fjords]

it's a heart, you silly billy!

i'm totes going to bed. i said "silly billy" in a public forum.

[adjovi]

aw...well...yeah. thanks is all i can come up with. and "to bed with you, woman!" ;)

[amand_r]

This is so adorable, really. I love the line from Gwen: You're always pretty," and she's smoothing his tie, and I bet she has that little smile of hers, and ooooh, so cute.

I love Jack and his dating, and Ianto being all, "beer and pizza ftw." Just love.

You have a free an easy style that I rather am in love with. It's factual, unencumbered, and I like that lots.

[adjovi]

You have a free an easy style that I rather am in love with.

aw...your comment made me grin from ear to ear. i'm so glad this worked for you--i wanted to make their banter as close to rl interactions that i have as possible. thanks so much for the lovely words. :)

[ares132006]

Thanks for clarifying the <3 for me, too. Heart it is. I thought it was me being old and clueless. Nice to know that you didn't know, either, sweetie. :0)

I love the behind the scenes stories. The scenes we didn't get to see. This fits in perfectly with the first one, with Sue's point of view.

Poor Ianto, so easily embarrassed. And Jack being Jack doesn't make it easy for him. And I loved Jack's impersonation of Gwen, and Ianto.

You know how much I love this, and the last two lines do fit, don't they. Even the one word line. *chuckle*

[adjovi]

thank you, as always! :) this one was a fun one to write.

And Jack being Jack doesn't make it easy for him.

nope--he sure doesn't! aw...

[kel_reiley]

omg omg! that was wonderful! love it!
there's more?

[adjovi]

yup--there will be a sequel/third part of this. :) i'm so glad you enjoyed. this one was a fun one to write...

[fide_et_spe]

This has made me feel very happy. It is so lovely. I love the "girl" "wanker" exchange. The way the end ties in with the first story is well done, and it kind of makes the mood drop, until then it is all so sweet and like a look into their private world. You captured the voices so well.

Now £149 for a bottle of wine, bloody hell!

[adjovi]

thanks so much! so glad you enjoyed. :) yup, i'd imagine jack would have developed quite the wine palate over the years. or, maybe he's really just a beer man. who knows. :)