Proximity

[adrenalin211]

Title: Proximity
Author: adrenalin211
Rating: AC for sexy!times and language
Characters: Jack Bauer/Renee Walker
Summary: Jack can feel his pulse hammer against his cell phone, a twisting nervousness forming in his stomach and, holy hell, blood rushing to where he feels her voice most.
Disclaimer: Not mine
Author’s notes: This was rush-written for The Porn

Comments

[marinw]

Whoa. That was hawt!

[adrenalin211]

Thanks so much for reading.:)

[leigh57]

Screening test haiku:
This fic's so hot I want to
Bite it in the ass!

[adrenalin211]

I can't figure out
why LJ's screening for me
But glad you thought "hot".

:) &hearts

[century_fox]

Rating: AC for THE FACT THAT I NEED TO TURN AN A/C ON AFTER READING THIS HOTNESS. Okay, that was really corny. BUT HOLY FUCKCAKES THIS IS SO HOT I CAN'T EVEN. GUHHHHH. I'm surprised it hasn't melted away all the snow outside. :P

(Like how despite the way this intoxicating blend of love and arousal announces her physical proximity like fireworks, his mind has never actually left her this whole trip.) asfhajkfhaskjfahf, that line is so hot and beautiful and I'm just constantly blown away by your ability to write such epic, lovely lines.

More feedback coming soon, but I just wanted to let you know that I read this and I love it and you're amazing.

♥

[adrenalin211]

Hahahaha. I am SO GLAD that you found it hot!!!

This was a real rush-job, so mostly I'm just glad it makes sense! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

[adrenalin211]

Thanks so much for reading & commenting. Honestly, I was too chicken to play out the phone sex! I couldn't bring myself to have them say certain things and/or didn't know how to write the dialogue without avoiding the long list of words I always avoid in sex scenes. Lol. I'm so glad that you liked it!

[mulefa]

Yes yes yes :)

[adrenalin211]

Thanks for reading :)