Five Times Jack and Renee Danced

Nov 03, 2011 16:55

So I (as in leigh57) am posting this for adrenalin211 because she's too lazy convinced it's not good enough to put up. I beg to differ.

This is for ws_scribe, who prompted with the title.

This is the dance they do... )

24, fanfic, jack/renee

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marinw November 3 2011, 21:26:21 UTC
*fans self*

Oh, the hot. These were lovely.

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adrenalin211 November 3 2011, 23:17:28 UTC
Thanks so much for reading. Jack should be happy enough to dance. In my happy world he totally is.

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leigh57 November 3 2011, 21:27:05 UTC
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Also, you are a genius for the parentheses idea. And more later, when everybody isn't talking at me:)

But squee.

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adrenalin211 November 3 2011, 23:18:24 UTC
You and the parentheses. Hee. I love it when I make you squee. It makes my heart all happy. Muah.

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cybertoothtiger November 4 2011, 03:03:54 UTC
Gah. *Thud*

Lovely, just... lovely. The thing with the parentheses works so well.

Ahahaha - DDR. And Stephen goading Jack. Oh, AU, I love you.

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adrenalin211 November 4 2011, 14:33:28 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Oh, AU. Without which my mind would be stuck in constant sorrow on this subject. Imagination is a beautiful thing.

Thanks again. :)

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ws_scribe November 4 2011, 09:03:19 UTC
I'm with leigh57 on the parentheses! Seriously. This is amazing. I heart this all over.

(This is how I LJ-love you) :)

I love that Jack was dancing and then he used the cheesy line from the song.

You guys, I don't know who to thanks. You or leigh57. I guess both. You for writing this wonderful peace and her for posting it. Consider yourselves *hugged*.

Also, on a completely different note. Am I the only one who LOVES the Bank of America commercials ONLY because Kiefer does the voice over?

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adrenalin211 November 4 2011, 14:37:45 UTC
Aww. I'm so glad you like this! I wrote this like an entire WEEK ago but then we had a massive snowstorm and lost power and, while we STILL don't have power, I went over to leigh57's house and was too lazy to get off her couch and so I gave her the okay to hack into my account and post this for me. I assure you you have her to thank as well. For giving me the electricity with which to do so. *warmth and internet and running hot water snugs to leigh57.

DUDE. I love the bank of America commercials. It makes me want to switch banks! So no you're not the only one. I love hearing his voice at the end. I'm like. JACK? WHERE'S JACK???

Anyway, thanks for reading! hee. Happy Friday!

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leigh57 November 4 2011, 17:06:08 UTC
Downside of legit NEVER watching TV -- I have never seen these commercials. This makes me so sad.

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adrenalin211 November 5 2011, 22:42:28 UTC
We've gotta remedy this. STAT. I'm gonna open up a new window on your computer for you to view at your leisure. And boy is it happypantscreating leisurely.

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century_fox November 4 2011, 15:27:10 UTC
I'm so behind on LJ but FLAIL this made my morning. I'm smiling so hugely right now. Thank you so much for writing this (and thanks to Shana for posting it!) This is absolutely amazing and hot and adorable and I just want to hug it. And thanks to ws_scribe for giving you this awesome prompt, too!

There’s a smudge of red wine and a glint of mischief on his face. hnnnnnng i want to lick it off and i can just picture that fucking expression on his face so perfectly this is very important feedback what are you talking about

Also, agreed with everyone on loving the choice you made with the parentheses!

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adrenalin211 November 4 2011, 16:12:50 UTC
Aww. I'm so glad this made you smile hugely!

I'm dying that so many people love these parentheses. It started out accidentally! Hee.

Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting. Hope you have an excellent day! :)

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