I FUCKING LOVE YOU OMG AHAHAHAHAHA. PART 1dapdaphaeOctober 12 2008, 02:25:15 UTC
Jaejoong is roped to the wall - for the third time that month, it has to be some sort of record, Yunho thinks wryly - head hung low and body slumping forward in a gesture of tired defeat; he looks like a tamed beast, but Yunho knows appearances are deceptive, especially with Jaejoong.
I *love* the imagery this gives. Because goddamnit, we both know that Jaejoong is a totally fierce MAN, who's capable of so many things. I'm not going to quote the paragraphs after this, but I have to say I adore your characterization of jae here. I love his sardonicism, the way he teases yunho, the way (to me, anyways) he shows (albeit subtley) his status even in his current situation. And not to mention his confidence. I love this raw confidence that he exudes. It's not even like he's being blatantly arrogant about it, like how some powerful inmates could be, but he definitely lets this self-assuredness leak out when he speaks. okay hold on. moving along...
'How are you?' he wants to ask. “That’s what you get for trying to knife other inmates,”
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FUCKING LOVE YOU OMG AHAHAHAHAHA. PART 2dapdaphaeOctober 12 2008, 02:26:19 UTC
“Shut up,” he replies, as smoothly as he can manage, and bites down on Jaejoong’s nipple through the light cotton of his tanktop, making the other man let out a surprised mewl. He plays with it until it's taut and erect under his mouth, until Jaejoong utters something that's half a curse and half a moan and shoves his chest into Yunho's face.
YESSSS. -FLAILS- I KEEP ON THINKING ABOUT MUSICBANK AND HOW JAEJOONG WAS TIED TO THE WALL THING AND OMG. THE IMAGERY. OMG. IT'S SO HOT. ALSKDJALDJK
“Like what you see?” Jaejoong murmurs, looking at him with hooded eyes and licking his lips, and Yunho feels himself grow even harder inside his pants.
I love your jaejoong. I really fucking do. Oh my god. And I like how you're making my Ho get harder in his pants. BOTH OF OUR MEN WITH HARD ONS YES PLS THANK YOU. ♥
“What the fuck are you doing?” Jaejoong pants, writhing uselessly against the ropes that chain him to the wall
( ... )
I FUCKING LOVE YOU OMG AHAHAHAHAHA. PART 3dapdaphaeOctober 12 2008, 02:27:02 UTC
His eyes fall to the angry red burns on Jaejoong's wrists, and he raises a hand to touch the coarse rope; he feels Jaejoong's eyes on him, slitted and sly like those of a feline, but the inmate doesn't say anything, doesn't ask. Doesn't beg. .....
Yunho feels like an idiot. He wasn't supposed to free Jaejoong, he wasn't supposed to fuck him, he isn't even supposed to be here; and yet he is, words lingering on the tip of his tongue and threatening to spill out. He digs his nails in his palms instead, mumbles a goodbye and walks towards the door. I'm sure I've already told you that I love your Jaejoong. I love his personality, I love his pride, I love his arrogance. so fucking fierce omg !!!!!! And I love Ho. I love how there's still a very human side of him even in a place such as this, where the guards should be conditioned to not feel for the inmates--after all, they're the ones who are supposed to hold the power. And even if they do show care, it should be given in a very different manner because the power balance is supposed to be
( ... )
Uh, my god, this is amazing and fantastic and so so hot >:)
I love your Jaejoong in this. Seriously. He's so fierce and sensual and just... just so dangerous and I love him so.
There's nothing soft about him, nothing submissive nor pliant even when he's like this Thank you. It does my head in when people feminise Jaejoong, and so this entire paragraph was just like, a complete breath of fresh air and so captivating. All of your descriptions were; the imagery. I love it :D
And the way that Yunho and Jaejoong banter with each other throughout the whole thing! And when Jaejoong says he could've strangled Yunho from behind -- I seriously love every little bit of this.
Uh. skdft.esr. I don't want to end up quoting your entire fic back at you, so I'll stop ranting now. But psst, I caught a tiny typo (There's a barely audible sight of relief from Jaejoong -- should be sigh, yeah?)
But yes. I loved this. I adore prison!Jaejoong. I am incoherent and not making sense. THANK YOU FOR SHARING :DDDD
Writing Jaejoong in this was... a not-so-guilty pleasure ;D I hate with a burning passion when people feminise Jae or make him weak and submissive, ugh. Just... no, thanks. DX I've always tried to portray him as a guy, and to write JaeHo's relationship as based on equality in a desperate effort to counter all the badfics I see <.<
But yeah, I'm really glad you liked this ♥ The banter, especially, because it was fun to write but hard too (I wanted to make it snarky and slang-ish too, but I kind of fail at both. Especially at slang XDDD;)
So, thank you for reading and commenting!!! :3
(and ajwdgjdgsagdja you are from the UK! ♥ I just had to check because when you said it was 3 am for you, here it was 4 am so I went "oooh, fellow European!" XDDD what can I say, I'm too used to seeing people either from America or south-eastern asia, so I get ridiculously excited when I find europeans, lol XD;)
ashgfafgsdsasafh Jae was so much fun to write!! I could see him in my mind and he was so damn sexy and wild *o*♥♥♥ I did my best to convey that image ;D
Thank you for not making JaeJoong a pansy in this. And that image of him tied to a wall will be forever burned in my mind in this prison-like setting, and being wanton for YunHo. XD
I like how it's sweet, rough and dangerous. I love the banter. Just <3.
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I *love* the imagery this gives. Because goddamnit, we both know that Jaejoong is a totally fierce MAN, who's capable of so many things. I'm not going to quote the paragraphs after this, but I have to say I adore your characterization of jae here. I love his sardonicism, the way he teases yunho, the way (to me, anyways) he shows (albeit subtley) his status even in his current situation. And not to mention his confidence. I love this raw confidence that he exudes. It's not even like he's being blatantly arrogant about it, like how some powerful inmates could be, but he definitely lets this self-assuredness leak out when he speaks. okay hold on. moving along...
'How are you?' he wants to ask. “That’s what you get for trying to knife other inmates,” ( ... )
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“Shut up,” he replies, as smoothly as he can manage, and bites down on Jaejoong’s nipple through the light cotton of his tanktop, making the other man let out a surprised mewl. He plays with it until it's taut and erect under his mouth, until Jaejoong utters something that's half a curse and half a moan and shoves his chest into Yunho's face.
YESSSS. -FLAILS- I KEEP ON THINKING ABOUT MUSICBANK AND HOW JAEJOONG WAS TIED TO THE WALL THING AND OMG. THE IMAGERY. OMG. IT'S SO HOT. ALSKDJALDJK
“Like what you see?” Jaejoong murmurs, looking at him with hooded eyes and licking his lips, and Yunho feels himself grow even harder inside his pants.
I love your jaejoong. I really fucking do. Oh my god. And I like how you're making my Ho get harder in his pants. BOTH OF OUR MEN WITH HARD ONS YES PLS THANK YOU. ♥
“What the fuck are you doing?” Jaejoong pants, writhing uselessly against the ropes that chain him to the wall ( ... )
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Yunho feels like an idiot. He wasn't supposed to free Jaejoong, he wasn't supposed to fuck him, he isn't even supposed to be here; and yet he is, words lingering on the tip of his tongue and threatening to spill out. He digs his nails in his palms instead, mumbles a goodbye and walks towards the door.
I'm sure I've already told you that I love your Jaejoong. I love his personality, I love his pride, I love his arrogance. so fucking fierce omg !!!!!! And I love Ho. I love how there's still a very human side of him even in a place such as this, where the guards should be conditioned to not feel for the inmates--after all, they're the ones who are supposed to hold the power. And even if they do show care, it should be given in a very different manner because the power balance is supposed to be ( ... )
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I love your Jaejoong in this. Seriously. He's so fierce and sensual and just... just so dangerous and I love him so.
There's nothing soft about him, nothing submissive nor pliant even when he's like this
Thank you. It does my head in when people feminise Jaejoong, and so this entire paragraph was just like, a complete breath of fresh air and so captivating. All of your descriptions were; the imagery. I love it :D
And the way that Yunho and Jaejoong banter with each other throughout the whole thing! And when Jaejoong says he could've strangled Yunho from behind -- I seriously love every little bit of this.
Uh. skdft.esr. I don't want to end up quoting your entire fic back at you, so I'll stop ranting now. But psst, I caught a tiny typo (There's a barely audible sight of relief from Jaejoong -- should be sigh, yeah?)
But yes. I loved this. I adore prison!Jaejoong. I am incoherent and not making sense. THANK YOU FOR SHARING :DDDD
...long comment is looooong :|
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(proper reply tomorrow, now I need sleep XDD;)
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(ugh, i should be sleeping too. being awake at 3am makes me do slightly crazy things :|| XD)
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But yeah, I'm really glad you liked this ♥ The banter, especially, because it was fun to write but hard too (I wanted to make it snarky and slang-ish too, but I kind of fail at both. Especially at slang XDDD;)
So, thank you for reading and commenting!!! :3
(and ajwdgjdgsagdja you are from the UK! ♥ I just had to check because when you said it was 3 am for you, here it was 4 am so I went "oooh, fellow European!" XDDD what can I say, I'm too used to seeing people either from America or south-eastern asia, so I get ridiculously excited when I find europeans, lol XD;)
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ashgfafgsdsasafh Jae was so much fun to write!! I could see him in my mind and he was so damn sexy and wild *o*♥♥♥ I did my best to convey that image ;D
And btw, your icon is awesome =D *thumbs up*
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So much hard love for this.
Your jaejoong is epick. And your Yunho adorable.
lovelovelovelove ♥
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I admit I had lots of fun writing Jae <.< I love imagining how he could be if he had been hardened by an environment like that ;D
Thanks for reading x3♥
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I like how it's sweet, rough and dangerous. I love the banter. Just <3.
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LOL, that's quite a nice image, imho *o* I had been dying to write prison!smut since the mirotic previews with Jae roped to the wall came out >=DDD
Thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥♥♥
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