[JaeHo] Bridge Over Troubled Water

[age_of_dreams]

Title: Bridge Over Troubled Water

Pairing(s): JaeHo
Length: One-shot
Word count: 2600~
Rating: B for blowjob R

Comments

[aoishinjitsu]

*eats first comment*

[aoishinjitsu]

Uhhhmmmmmm ILU? Like, srsly... ♥ I told you this wasn't a piece of crap. Thanks for letting me beta it~ it really is quite good. I love the feel of it... a bit sad, but warm all the same. I know you were all "DIFSIOD OMFG IT'S SO CLICHED AND AWFUL. WHY AM I WRITING THIS?" but it's really not, and I do love it. So stop being so hard on yourself. Also, I abso-fucking-lutely love you for mentioning Jae's scars, and Yunho kissing and laving at them. *______* *hazsekritkink* ♥♥♥

And because it amuses me...

“Who says you're that skilled, Jung Yunho?” he bites back - albeit a little breathlessly -, but Yunho detects the smile in his voice. UHM. OBVS HE'S THAT SKILLED. I mean, with that pretty mouth and long fingers and, anyway, it's not like Jae's never seen him dance. Obvs Yunho has skillz. *O*

[age_of_dreams]

Thank you for betaing it! XD♥♥♥ ANd for your words too x3

*shares the kink for Jae's scar* *________*♥

And lol, I'm sure he knows Yunho IS skilled... but he probably likes to tease him so that he won't slack and his performances will always be at their top ;P

Thanks, bb ♥

[nevaeh86]

♥♥♥♥♥♥
This is so perfect for Christmas... and yeah I forgot: SOMETHING NEW FROM YOU!

First of all: Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!

I don't think the one-shot sounds much disjointed. Maybe a little bit between the main part and the bonus part. BUT I think in another way it's just perfect.
It's like we all know that it is. In the dark of the night everythink seems to be a lot worse than we all think and you feel unloved and alone and like everything is too much for you and you can't do the things you want to do because they a too big for you...
I like the thought of Yunho comforting in such a situation. And I like how you have written it.

And the bonus part: ♥ for how you've written Changmin.

I think that's all I have to say.
I really like it and thanks again for sharing with us.

Merry Christmas.

[age_of_dreams]

Awww, Ellen ;_;♥♥♥♥♥♥ Thank you so much for your comment ♥
That was the feeling I wanted to convey, and I still don't think I fully managed to do it, but your words really cheer me up ^^;

Thanks :3♥♥♥

And I'm glad you like Changmin ;D

[nevaeh86]

♥
I think you did a good job with this one-shot. Really!
I am glad my words cheered you up like your one-shot cheered me up ;)

And yes: I love Changmin ;)

[ara_niey]

wahhh~
i love this so much..enough said!*grins*

[age_of_dreams]

:DDD

Thank you!! ♥

[ookazumioo]

aww~ love itt

makes me feel warm ..

*cuddles*

[age_of_dreams]

Awww, I'm glad you liked it :D♥

[riiche]

Oh, so gorgeous <3

I adore how Yunho is able to tear away the layers of JaeJoong's facade, bit by bit until he crumbles. I especially love the approach Yunho has with JaeJoong here, that gentle affection that leads to something that should be comfort sex but really isn't because Yunho places so much of his love into making JaeJoong feel better and that - that warms my heart.

Your Changmin. “Hyung,” Changmin calls out - and Yunho wonders how is it possible for Changmin to always make the word sound like an insult - He rules the world. He really does.

Beautifully written; I love this so much.

[age_of_dreams]

asgdadsghdasf seeing you comment makes me go *0* every time x3♥

I think Yunho has that kind of gentleness and patience that makes people trust him and open to him even when they're trying to cut everything out. And this probably shows the most to those he really cares for, like Jaejoong ♥

(Changmin is so much fun to write XDDD)

Thank you ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed this.