[JaeHo] Far/Close

Jan 31, 2009 21:56

Title: Far/Close

Pairing(s): JaeHo
Length: One-shot
Word count: 2600~ (I don't do it on purpose, I swear ;-;)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst/ shameless Fluff ( Read more... )

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imie_schweetzel January 31 2009, 22:01:21 UTC
simona u r here! *glomps*

saving a spot n will come back to read later. its 6am where i am and i can barely open my eyes. -__-

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 01:22:18 UTC
Hi :DDDDD *glomps back*

Ahahahaha take your time XD (and sleep well!)♥

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imie_schweetzel February 1 2009, 06:38:31 UTC
firstly, kewfugiwoerfberyfguwer that was awesome. my first read for today and im in cloud 9 because its just awesome. :DDD

bear with me coz im gonna start quoting. lol. xD

“Hey yourself,” Jaejoong replies softly, bending down to brush his lips against Yunho’s, “were you asleep? I tried to call you but you never picked up.” - the mental image kills me. so sweet. guhhhh jae. and sleepy ho. kissing. ah the sweetness!

On top of everything sits the painkillers leaflet, with 'danger of gastrointestinal irritation in case of assumption on an empty stomach' highlighted twice in bright yellow. - cute and it feels good to read ho's inner ego-struggle. men and their need to be strong all the time. pfft. i feel like smacking ho hard in the head here. :p

“Probably it's what you did, at least in his eyes. You know how he takes his position seriously. He doesn't like to show his weak side and he's terrified of not living up to people's expectations.” - so...leader-sshi. i can imagine him having this fear all the time. *pats him*

“Yunho.” ( ... )

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 10:50:01 UTC
omfggg *overwhelmed* :'DDD♥

I'm really happy you enjoyed this ♥♥♥

Lol, I felt like smacking Yunho too, at some point XD But I have fun writing him as a lovable stubborn moron with Jae to set him straight ;P

And asdhjgdhga I love writing JaeHo fluff ;-;♥ *wibbles* I'm glad you liked those parts :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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nevaeh86 January 31 2009, 23:04:00 UTC
uuuuaaah, so cute.
I can totally understand both of them and I am glad that they worked it out ;)
And that's all I can say for now because it is midnight and I studied all day and my brian isn't working anymore ;)

I am glad you posted something and that you still have fun writing =)

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 01:25:55 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! :D
Hopefully the JaeHo fluff will inspire sweet dreams. Or something ;D

I do. I might have issues about it, but I love writing (jaeho) too much to give it up completely :)♥

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 01:50:41 UTC
ahsdhsdaggdasj thank you for the epic comment ;-;♥

That's something I've always liked to explore - Yunho's need to be strong and in control vs his moments of weakness. The boy needs to let go a little more and that's what Jae is for ;D

Thanks ♥ Jae's caring side never fails to get to me, so I'm glad it came across well :3

And thanks for quoting that part!!! I wasn't sure if it sounded good enough :|

Thank you for reading ♥♥♥♥♥

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 10:53:00 UTC
I find him so adorable :'D He's such a big softie but he always tries to act all manly, in public XD

Jae is so interesting to write...he has so many different sides *_*

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lucy_loveless February 1 2009, 00:27:56 UTC
awwwwwwwwwww

leader sshi is so stubborn~♥

glad they could clear things at the end ^^

really sweet, i loved it♥

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 01:52:14 UTC
:DDD♥♥♥♥

I'm happy you liked it :3 Thanks for reading!

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 11:33:29 UTC
hiii thea :D!!! Yes, I'm still on hiatus... I delurked just to post this fic XD

I'm glad you enjoyed this :DDDDDD♥♥♥♥

Ohhhhhhhhh that's awesome *_____* I'll go read it straight away, thanks X33

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