[JaeHo] Far/Close

Jan 31, 2009 21:56

Title: Far/Close

Pairing(s): JaeHo
Length: One-shot
Word count: 2600~ (I don't do it on purpose, I swear ;-;)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst/ shameless Fluff ( Read more... )

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chloe1910 February 1 2009, 01:37:03 UTC
Simona!!! I've missed you!! Have I told you I received your card and the Jae bookmark!!! I love it! Thanks!!!!!

This is truly simple but beautifully and heartwarmingly written. To be honest, I could totally see Yunho acting like a brat during his injuries cause he does come across as someone with a lot of pride and take to being hurt as being a useless leader harshly...

Yunho ah, you might be the leader of Dong Bang Shin Ki, but to Jaejoong you are just Yunho, his lover and someone who has been there for him when he's in need and he's just being the same for you.

This fic is the perfect accompaniment to all the fluffy Yunjaeness that we see lately...

*huggles Hoshi*

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 11:44:12 UTC
Chloe!!! I missed you too ♥♥♥♥♥ (Aw, I'm glad you did!! :D)

And thank you so much for your comments, they're always so nice ;-;♥ I'm really happy you liked this fic x33

*huggles back*

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katzk February 1 2009, 02:14:02 UTC
This is so sweet. But I think I'm still giggling over the mental image of JJ kicking a door open.

:D

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 10:55:09 UTC
...don't focus on the silly things, you! XDDDDDDDDD

And I can so see him trying to do that, if needs be 8DDD

:D♥♥♥♥♥

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dreaminthepast February 1 2009, 02:55:32 UTC
*attacks you!*

Oh baby, that was so beautiful.

Jaejoong takes Yunho's face in his hands and turns it towards him. “I will never stop needing you, Yunho,” he says, eyes dark and serious. “Never. So stop saying you’re useless, and let me help you.” Totally made my heart lurch. Hurt so good.

I loved your characterization in this, I empathize 100% with Yunho here. It really is horrible to be hurt and feel useless. Not even that, just the want to be healthy again and do everything you could before without everyone taking care of you.
But it's good that he has Joongie to push back and take care of him. They are both stubborn enough to make it work.

The ending was so sweet, I loved the little detail where they bumped noses.

I loved it all so much, ♥ you BB.

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 11:49:35 UTC
agshdfadfa Sharynnnn ♥♥♥♥ *glomps*

Yeah, I can understand Yunho too, especially seeing how much he cares about his "leader" image. But Jae is stubborn enough for him too ;P

Thank you for reading, bb ♥ I'm happy you liked it!!

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konnistique February 1 2009, 03:14:10 UTC
Ooh I like the character explorations here ♥ Both YH and JJ are undeniably complex in their own ways 8D

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 11:00:37 UTC
They are ♥ And they're so fun to explore x333

Thank you for reading!!

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asmilewaiting February 1 2009, 03:37:35 UTC
This is so sweet ^_^ I love it~

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 11:01:15 UTC
Aww, thanks :DDD♥

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