[JaeHo] Far/Close

Jan 31, 2009 21:56

Title: Far/Close

Pairing(s): JaeHo
Length: One-shot
Word count: 2600~ (I don't do it on purpose, I swear ;-;)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst/ shameless Fluff ( Read more... )

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riiche February 1 2009, 04:42:22 UTC
DDDD: SO SWEET.

I love how JaeJoong persists with Yunho even when Yunho was being completely mean (and understandably so, even if he doesn't have any right to be!). And the way you portray their love is just perfect and adorable.

He's still holding him when the laughter turns broken and hysterical and he starts sobbing into Jaejoong's neck like an injured animal.

This, for some reason, was my favourite line. It's just so raw and real somehow.

Ahhh, I missed your writing! :'D♥

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 11:54:25 UTC
:DDDD I was in need of fluff ;D

Jae is stubborn and very in love. A powerful combination XDDDDDDDD
LOL, but seriously, I love to write about them and their love. It makes my heart flutter in happiness *_* /end sap

I missed writing ;;

Thank you so much for reading and commenting :'D♥♥♥♥ Your words never fail to make me smiiiile :3♥

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guu_dammit February 1 2009, 05:15:04 UTC
YAYAYAYAY YOU POSTED ITT YAYAYAYAYA LOVED THE ENDING YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ HEARTS HEARTS HEARTS

aw this is so sweet Hoshi ♥ I love the way Yunho laughs histerically and then sobs like /a wounded animal/. I think that was the image that I like the most (besides my regular love of hystericaly laughter). You rockkkkkked this thing. And yeah BAD YUNHO NO DOING THE DIRTY IF IT COMPROMISES YOU BACK YOU MORON!! aish kids these day.

anyways you know what i think about this and i loved that you finally managed to finish it and put it up cause its all kinds of sweet and cute ♥ ♥ ♥

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 11:57:46 UTC
AHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA WTF I CAN TELL YOU WERE STILL UNDER THE EFFECT OF FINISHED!FIC X'DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD♥

But I'm sooooooooooooo happy you liked thissssss :DDDDD

(AHAHAHAHAHA I WAS DEBATING WHETHER TO MAKE THEM GO AT IT *GENTLY* OR NOT AND THEN I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU AND DECIDED AGAINST IT XDDD STOP INFLUENCING ME AJSDGASGD DDD:!!!1!!1!)

I'm glad I managed to finish it too, cause I don't think I'll be able to write something else for a while xD;;

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guu_dammit February 2 2009, 15:39:12 UTC
HAHAHA YES I WAS VERY VERY HIGH ON FINISHED!FIC LOVE.

HAHAHA YES I'M SORRY THAT YOU COULDN'T WRITE SMUT IN THE END BUT I GUESS THEY'LL HAVE PLENTY OF TIME AFTER YUNHO GETS BETTER TO GO AT IT AS MANY TIMES AS THEY LIKE!!!!

I DEMAND KITTY FIC TOOOOOO I DEMAND I DEMAND I DEMANDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!



PS your icon is so all kinds of love I wanna steal it and eat it ;~;. YunJae♥

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 15:50:25 UTC
That was obvious ;P (and sorry I can't come on msn now I'm just passing by to check a uni thing online x.x)

LOL XD ARE YOU REALLY SORRY? HMM? But it's better this way... the fic I wrote before this had comfort smut too (even if the situation was reversed), so it would've been boring to write another. Maybe I'll do a separate smutlet-sequel for my own personal enjoyment :P

THEN DO ALL THE EXAMSS FOR MEEEE ;-;

adhadah I know it's so pretty ♥ And I have an obsession for paris!JaeHo pics XD♥♥♥♥♥

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age_of_dreams February 1 2009, 10:57:07 UTC
Thanks :)

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oh_thexirony February 1 2009, 06:33:39 UTC
I seriously like your writing bb :D

&this one just made me so damm happy ^^ ♥

I loved the bff!jaechun because shoot me. i totally love jaechun just not in a romantic way & how jaejoong cares & cares but doesn't come across like some forty year old nursemaid without man parts.

._. that sounded weird, but hopefully you get what i mean ^^

&finally, i like how you show yunho grappling with his 'weakness' here & all, because seriously, it would be totally out of this world for yunho to be always perfect, strong &whatnot.

♥♥♥

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 12:04:10 UTC
Thank you, it means a lot ♥ Same for me, I can't wait to get back from hiatus to read your works x333

bff!Jaechun is adorable :'DDD

...ahahaha I think I *get what I mean XDDDDDD *stuck with the mental image, now* XD

Agreed ^^ I like to explore Yunho's "weaknesses", for some reason. Maybe cause he puts up such a strong facade.

Thank you very much for reading!! :3♥♥♥♥♥

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machine_of_july February 1 2009, 07:51:06 UTC
yunho's lucky he's hurt or I would have drop-kicked his ass years ago sflsdjfhldsf. there's one thing to be stubborn and then there's another to be just plain stupid. gah. men.

*coughs* ahem anyways, good thing that idiot has another one by his side to put him in his place now and then :3333

maybe yunho should get some kind of reward for putting aside his pride once his back is better hmm 8DDDD?

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age_of_dreams February 2 2009, 15:41:14 UTC
XDDDDDDDDDDD No need to kick him, I'm sure Jae is more than able (and willing) to do so :P

...I knew you would've said that 8D maybe

Thanks :D♥♥♥♥♥♥

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