FIC: Shattered Knight - Obi-Wan, Anakin - NC-17

[agentjedi]

TITLE: Shattered Knight
AUTHOR: agentjedi
GIFT FOR: obi_fan in the jedi__santa exchange
RATING: Adult
PAIRINGS: Obi-Wan Kenobi/Anakin Skywalker
TIMEFRAME: Prequel: during Clone Wars
SUMMARY: One night was all it took to shatter a lifetime between master and padawan.
WARNINGS: Same sex pairing. Graphic sex.
WORD COUNT: 4,526

Comments

[anonymous]

That was hot. And, you did a great job keeping them in character.

[pronker]

You've added a lovely picture, almost a despairing, pleading Obi-Wan, and then those iconic swirls of color, too, yeah. It was interesting reading the genesis of the story. I'm very glad it is no longer in limbo.

[temple_mistress]

*squee* I LOVE stories set during the CW for AO, and I agree with your reasoning as to how such a relationship would come to pass. I generally take it a step further that Anakin would have done what he did for Obi-Wan, or to save Obi-Wan, before he'd do it for Padme, even, but those are my rose-colored glasses, lol.

I love your style, shorter sentences with impact alternating with longer introspective paragraphs. It took me forever to read this bc I just lingered from paragraph to paragraph, savoring the imagery and the emotion you were able to convey.

Thank you so much for sharing--Anakin and Obi-Wan are my original OTP and I love it when a great author writes a great story for them. Thanks!

[little_deviant]

loved it :)

[alley_skywalker]

This was a wonderfull treat to come home to! I've been away from the comm for way too long sadly and this was a great way to get back in the Obi/Ani swing of things. Great job!