Comments | agentrogue: Had to make up for a lack I guess.

agentrogue

Had to make up for a lack I guess.

Mar 03, 2004 09:26

The snow tipped peaks of the mountains belied the intense heat beating down on the land. The afternoon had insisted on teasing the landscape with a subtle breeze here and there which didn't cool enough to provide any real refrain. The sun glared down angrily on the valley in between the mountain tops, heating the armor of four riders making their ( Read more... )

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damn you atari_n1nj4 March 3 2004, 12:48:59 UTC

Where's Val? You said she would be in this... Don't tell me that the "I like your hair shaggy" line was all she got because if this is the case I will shoot you. Not really. Now then, stop paying so much attention to Jeridin and let's hear more about Val. Yes, you WILL give us more about Val. And Mal too. Yeah, Mal's alright. I guess Charles is OK. But Val is awesome too! ...love you...

Re: damn you agentrogue March 3 2004, 13:07:48 UTC

Yes, there will be more. I just got cut off while I was writing, so I had to stop. I'm gonna update it.

Good... atari_n1nj4 March 3 2004, 13:37:46 UTC

Yes, you had better. I mean *ahem* please do...

......BRILLIANT!......

harumph alternatepants March 3 2004, 14:38:59 UTC

Jaxxxon's name is spelled with the requisite three x's, and moreso, when did Jaxxxon grow four years?

Re: harumph alternatepants March 3 2004, 14:41:15 UTC

& Val? who's Val? Mal once knew a Valerie, or was it Valencia? Or was it Scuttlechick McAssintheair?

Re: harumph agentrogue March 3 2004, 14:47:27 UTC

No, Jaxon has one X for he shall never be portrayed in any feature film by Vin Diesel. And he grew four years to properly reflect his capabilities. It's impossible for an eleven year old to be that good. He's just hyper, okay? And friggin' call me at Chels' house.

What happened to the paragraphs?? scroundral March 3 2004, 18:31:14 UTC

First: Why?
Second: Is this the beginning or is there more?
Third: Paragraphs are a writers friend.
Forth: Paragraphs are a readers friend.
Fifth: When is the next page?
Sixth: Is this from your WoT game or fresh off the top?

Thanks for the X-Box. Ceaser had a good lunch.
Remind me to tell you about the Random House writing competition.
Visit with you later.
Kidding about the box. I like soulblade 2.

Re: What happened to the paragraphs?? agentrogue March 3 2004, 20:30:10 UTC

Why? Because I hadn't written anything in sometime and felt compelled to be somewhat creative. I've got a few pages of character development that I wrote about my character. Nothing is really strung together yet. Next page is whenever I guess. And yes, this is from my WoT game.

FOR SHAME thellamas March 3 2004, 22:55:04 UTC

You must have reeeeallly lost your English touch-- you used the wrong for of "there/they're/their" in you Subject line. That, my friend, is a cardinal sin.

Now Jordan, either read Confederacy of Dunces or give it freaking back. Ignatius judges you!

Re: FOR SHAME scroundral March 4 2004, 23:39:20 UTC

Heya Ms LLamas, tell Amy C hi for me please. (From Shellys dad anyway)

Thanks
C

Re: FOR SHAME agentrogue March 5 2004, 14:04:09 UTC

That's what happens when you write on three hours of sleep, my friend.

Oh Bother!! scroundral March 4 2004, 23:37:46 UTC

I found out where the paragraphs went. LJ steals them. If you put them in, but dont skip a line, they get taken away. That is very LAME!!! There is nothing worse than a word processing program that steals paragraphs.

A perfect ending to a less then perfect day!