Comments | aheartfulofyou: "Laughs and Lashings"--- (R; Sylar/Mohinder)

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"Laughs and Lashings"--- (R; Sylar/Mohinder)

Jul 03, 2007 22:29

Title: Laughs and Lashings
Author: aheartfulofyou
Pairings: Sylar/Mohinder (Mohinder/Gabriel)
Rating: R (violence, disturbing imagery, sexual situations)
Words: 1,558
Settings/Spoilers: Post-S1.
Notes: For the mylar_fic comm ficathon, for angst week, with the prompt of "isolation". Dedicated to sesemperamabo, who totally receives this horrifically angsty (as demanded) fic from me. ( Read more... )

slash, heroes, angst, sylar/mohinder, fanfic, ficathon

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drunken_hedghog July 4 2007, 10:27:06 UTC

A Clockwork Orange is one of my favourite books so I was hoping I'd like this. Boy was I wrong. This was better that I'd hoped. The quick pacing, the sectioning off, I loved the use of Candace as a means of conditioning. This was a really good fic. *mems*

aheartfulofyou July 4 2007, 15:33:54 UTC

You're the first person who mentioned A Clockwork Orange, so you get a prize for that. I mean, obviously I quoted it and all, but yes. :) Thank you so much, I'm really glad it worked for you!

drunken_hedghog July 4 2007, 18:59:13 UTC

Woohoo, I won a prize! To be honest, I'm a clockwork-orange nut so I could see the little touches throughout the fic. The tape holding sylar's eyes open, , the violent images, the drugged sense of the "conditioning" scene and even his reaction to Mohinder's cut. Even without the quote you can see the story throughout this fic, without it being overpowering, or a Clockwork Orange - Heroes remix. Very well done.

aheartfulofyou July 5 2007, 03:03:46 UTC

Yay, thank you. That was my intent, so I'm glad it came across, without being completely in your face obvious/overwhelming.

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aheartfulofyou July 4 2007, 15:34:23 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!

losergeek42 July 4 2007, 18:41:37 UTC

This is just fantastic- not only the story itself but the first part, the conditioning, is a plot-bunny I'd had in my head for a while now and I just couldn't do it justice.
You've done it to perfection!

I will be keeping an eye out for more of your work because this piece blew me away.

x

aheartfulofyou July 5 2007, 03:05:08 UTC

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

chanelcoco July 4 2007, 18:58:48 UTC

Mm ♥
I love how you portrayed Gabriel - he's so deliciously destroyed. *is twisted*

aheartfulofyou July 5 2007, 03:17:42 UTC

*Is twisted too no worries*. Thank you so much! ♥

sesemperamabo July 5 2007, 07:01:01 UTC

HUNNY YOU ARE SO FABULOUS

This was so so beautiful and wrongity wrong and omg it's too late for coherency but thank you <3 Win <3<3<3

aheartfulofyou July 5 2007, 16:39:27 UTC

THANK YOU CA AW I'M GLAD.

&hearts back!