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aidill

Haunted: Chapter 14

May 21, 2009 14:09

Title: Haunted (14/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya
Summary: Ohno inherits a big and ramshackle mansion from a distant relative, but there is much more in his new house than it seems at first sight.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2272
Disclaimer: The plot is mine, and the wrapping is thanks to zazasukie ^__^
AN: Un-betaed and english isn't my mother tongue. Waning, this chapter ( Read more... )

multichapter, au, ohmiya, haunted, pg

Comments 53

zazasukie May 21 2009, 20:46:45 UTC

Such a sad story TT_TT I feel really sorry for the poor Sumire. Thought Nino was the one that died, I think she got the worst part of it...
But well, it's thanks to Nino's death that he has been able to meet Ohno... so it's not that bad, is it? ^___^b

aidill May 22 2009, 11:53:19 UTC

Yep! It's not so bad (except for Sumire)... now Nino has Ohno... and maybe they can bring Nino back to life! ^___~

lilazngrl11794 May 21 2009, 21:09:48 UTC

omg so interesting ♥
update soon please!

aidill May 22 2009, 11:55:11 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^___^
I'll try to update as soon as possible!

pwoth May 22 2009, 00:12:29 UTC

AH! WILL THE RIPPED PAGES BE IN THE BOX?!?!
*suspense*
Love this story~~! Thank you for updating ^w^

aidill May 22 2009, 11:59:38 UTC

Maybe not... or maybe there is something more inside that music box! Who knows? ^___~

I'm really happy that you like the story! Thanks a lot for your comment! ^____^

pwoth May 22 2009, 16:10:16 UTC

(XDD for some reason, when you said there might be something more in the box...I thought condoms >__>)

aidill May 22 2009, 17:41:59 UTC

LMAO! XDXDXDXD
That was a really good one!

crafty381 May 22 2009, 04:24:17 UTC

this story is so adorable, if i could i would so squish/hug it so, so tight and never let go lol and, i'm really sorry i'm not always able to comment but i've been definitely following this ^__^ how could i not when ghost!neener and dazed!ohno won't let me ;p they're so cute/fluffy together :D

dare i hope that nino will come back to life and live with ohno happily ever after??!!! well, if not, being like they are right now is fine with me c",)

aidill May 22 2009, 12:18:04 UTC

Don't worry, the most important thing is that you enjoy the story! ^___^
Well, now there seems to be an opportunity for him to come back to life but... will they dare to use it and face the consequences if it fails?

thetagal13 May 22 2009, 05:22:29 UTC

Another cliffhanger. But Nino life story is so sad, in a way. But Ohno will solve all the problems i bet!

aidill May 22 2009, 12:22:40 UTC

Yep, another one... and the next chapter possibly has another one... but what can I do? The end of the story is nearer with each chapter and the cliffhangers appear like mushrooms! XD
But of course! Ohno will try his best to straighten up the situation! ^___^b
Thanks a lot for reading!