Haunted: Chapter 14

May 21, 2009 14:09

Title: Haunted (14/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya
Summary: Ohno inherits a big and ramshackle mansion from a distant relative, but there is much more in his new house than it seems at first sight.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2272
Disclaimer: The plot is mine, and the wrapping is thanks to zazasukie ^__^
AN: Un-betaed and english isn't my mother tongue. Waning, this chapter ( Read more... )

multichapter, au, ohmiya, haunted, pg

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aidill May 22 2009, 12:26:47 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! ^___^
Shhhh! I'm not going to spoil you next chapter... but at least now they have an opportunity! ^___~

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rio_sora May 23 2009, 15:26:30 UTC
i'm sorry i just managed to give you comment only now,really sorry~
ur story is really interesting and it glued me well to keep on reading,
seriously, i love it!
can't wait for the next chapter~

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aidill May 24 2009, 16:35:46 UTC
>///< Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed the story so far and I hope next chapters don't disappoint you! ^___^
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!

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beastlover May 24 2009, 03:55:16 UTC
Wonderfully suspenseful. And Oh-chan's tears, very cute.

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beastlover May 24 2009, 04:02:50 UTC
BTW, I forgot to tell you I thought it was awesome that you didn't tell Nino's past from Nino's point of view, like in his own old journal. It made it easier to sympathize with him for some reason for me. Not that it's hard to sympathize with him :) Thanks again! Update ASAP!!

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aidill May 24 2009, 16:40:38 UTC
Oh-chan is so sweet~ <3<3

To tell you the truth, it was easier to tell the story of his past life from other point of view, and it suits better the things that are going to happen next chapter! ^___~
Thanks a lot for reading!

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a_mbry0 May 24 2009, 16:24:29 UTC
aaa this was awesome!
finally we got to know Nino's past and it sure was sad..
but i loved this! :D
thank you! ^_^

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aidill May 24 2009, 16:47:20 UTC
The story is finally revealing the secrets and answering the questions from past chapters... but there are still a few more... Da da Dum! XD

Poor Nino!, he has a sad past, though I think that Sumire had the worst part of it because Nino doesn't remember anything and now he has Ohno with him! ^___~

Thank you very much for your comment!

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is248 May 31 2009, 22:10:29 UTC
Am I too late? Sorry, I know it would never be too late to comment but actually, I'm not sure if I have read this or not.

Anyway, I really love how you reveal all of Nino's past. Especially this.."I had always felt attracted to the arty type." it's funny and true! >_<

What's next? I will go and read the next one now!

thank you so much. this is getting more interesting and cute too! (^___^)

*Oh, it would be so much fun if they can bring Nino back to life ne...

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aidill June 1 2009, 10:29:26 UTC
He has certain fixation for this type, ne? :3
I'm happy you liked how I revealed Nino's past! ^___^
Thanks for reading!

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