assignment...any advice is taken gladly!

Mar 09, 2006 16:50

A few months ago, I was diagnosed with an overactive bladder, or OAB. The symptoms of this debilitating disorder were apparent: the frequent use of the laboratory throughout the day and night, along with the anxiety I felt when attending a long meeting, or sitting through a traffic jam knowing a toilet wouldn't be available to me at any given ( Read more... )

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mels_username March 10 2006, 00:33:05 UTC
is this a true story?

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airo24 March 10 2006, 01:48:13 UTC
some stuff in it has happened to me.. like the bathroom.. only i was never caught..and i do have numerical dyslexia --- which is why i can never pay bills on time, if that makes any sense.

but no, this is a work of fiction, my dear..

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atomicspin March 10 2006, 18:39:19 UTC
www.paytrust.com

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atomicspin March 10 2006, 00:53:25 UTC
Great story, but haven't I seen elements of this story in your other storeis (ie the bathroom scene)?

YOU WRITE PRETTY! MAKE OUT WITH ME NOW!

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airo24 March 10 2006, 01:48:36 UTC
are you calling me james frey

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atomicspin March 10 2006, 18:46:40 UTC
That's where I recognized the bathroom scene. It happened to you. See? I read your LJ.

I know you asked me to take a look at the story and add my two cents, but it's pretty much perfect. Everything fits, from the words to the paragraphs. If I added anything it would just look like it was being crammed in.

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shirogirl March 10 2006, 01:44:07 UTC
word for word exactly what I wanted to say :)

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airo24 March 10 2006, 01:53:56 UTC
ohh i'm glad you liked it.. because i think ur hysterical and if someone hysterical likes it, then i will hand it in to my professor.

CANADIA FOREVER

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airo24 March 10 2006, 01:52:52 UTC
stumble upon while..say.. you're on the toilet?

(i have a hidden love for toilet reading)

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voltzmanga March 10 2006, 07:34:18 UTC
crap guilt... you are a trip. :-) i knew i married you for a reason.

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airo24 March 10 2006, 19:18:50 UTC
u mean it wasn't for me miracle talents in the sack!?!?!?!? im schocked.

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doonies73 March 10 2006, 17:21:07 UTC
what's a "marble" macchiato?

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airo24 March 10 2006, 19:17:57 UTC
well well well --- look who it is!

marble macchiato... i dont know , i had gone to the starbucks website to find out what their largest size serving is (venti, madame), and i saw an add for a marble macchiato --- i liked the way it sounded. i have no idea how it tastes..although i do presume it might contain fragments of balls in it. and not the boy kind, perv.

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atomicspin March 11 2006, 00:50:12 UTC
It's a mocha with white chocolate AND regular chocolate.

Incidentlly, both taste good on nipples as well.

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