Comments | aisatsanashiba: The Dance, chap 3

aisatsanashiba

The Dance, chap 3

Feb 15, 2008 23:28

Title: The Dance, Chapter Three
Pairing: Hakkai/Gojyo
Rating: PG (For the chapter... destined to go up.)
Word count: 1,446
Warning: language.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

( Right. Like that time with Alex. Cute brunette youkai. Kinda short, but from what you told me he had a huge-- )

the dance, saiyuki

Comments 2

kerumica February 17 2008, 01:44:09 UTC

You're killing me here! This was such a great chapter. I do hope that Gojyo's inability to speak up is due to the fact that he is having some sort of toxic reaction to whatever he had eaten earlier in the day and not that he's going to turn Hakkai down. I don't think I would like him very much if he did. Although I'm sure that's not the case. Looking forward to chapter 4 :)

aisatsanashiba February 17 2008, 04:50:38 UTC

I think his silence is due to shock. He might be better soon... Glad I'm still pleasing people, though.