Comments | aisatsanashiba: The Dance, chap 4

aisatsanashiba

Apr 04, 2008 12:25

Title: The Dance, Chapter Four
Fandom: Saiyuki
Characters: Hakkai/Gojyo
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 3,037
Warning: language and gay sex.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
( Didn’t know how to love someone. I didn’t even like myself most days. )

Comments 5

kerumica April 4 2008, 18:40:48 UTC

Yea!!!! I loved it!! The dance floor scene was just too special. Thanks for sharing this story :)

aisatsanashiba April 5 2008, 04:54:46 UTC

Woo. Thanks for reading.

criticisms anonymous April 13 2008, 21:55:28 UTC

A couple words were messed up just from typing too fast.
Inviting, erotic imagery. =)

Re: criticisms aisatsanashiba April 14 2008, 02:56:31 UTC

Point please? It's hard to see when I'm the one who wrote it. I read it correctly without realizing.

aliaself June 15 2008, 17:42:23 UTC

Excellent story.
I hope you write more of this pair.