Perfection

May 10, 2011 20:57

Title: Perfection
Author: Akilei
Pairing: Kisung
Rating: G
Summary: In Kibum's eyes, Yesung is perfect. Even if others beg to differ. After all, he's the only one whose opinion matters.
Note: For blueicecreamxo ~
Note2: Totally didn't mean for this to be like Too Perfect. xDDD
I don't own~

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fanfic, kisung, super junior

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blueicecreamxo May 11 2011, 07:10:41 UTC
i cannot explain in words to you, how cute i think this is xD & oh wow! it's like, so realistic haha, i can actually picture them doing that and their actions are so... them haha it's amazing~

and LOL kibummie WOULD be a masochist hahaha xDDD && hahahaha lesson learned: never fall asleep with suju members around xD LOL

oh & this:
Hm. I think I’ve just about used every positive adjective in the dictionary…

“Yeah, of course,” Yesung cautiously placed his head on Kibum’s shoulder. Kibum kept himself from jumping in pleasant surprise, closing his eyes for a moment and letting Yesung’s scent waft around him.

So gor -

Okay, no. No blanking out now.

LOVE that part hehehe ohh kibummie~ x)

♥♥♥ thank you for the fic :D haha it was perfect ;)

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akilei May 11 2011, 20:32:30 UTC
Thanks~~ Really? I thought I might have made Yesung a bit too cutesy...and Kibum a bit too obsessive..and the whole thing a bit too twilight-like. xDD Oh, well.

Oh, you don't even know. Apparently, one of my friends tested the theory of people peeing if you pour warm water into their hand while they're asleep at a camp...

xDD Yeah. I liked that line, too. ^__^

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blueicecreamxo May 18 2011, 07:10:29 UTC
YESH :3
haha i dont mind cutesy yesungie and ocd kibummie but i would've drawn the line at twilight and tell you xD trust me when i say this haha

OMG LOL i feel so bad for the kid he tested it on hahaha

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akilei May 18 2011, 20:30:25 UTC
Yeah...Twilight in writing isn't good...

xD It was a girl, too! But I think she got them back... Not sure..

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yukihime13 May 12 2011, 04:56:58 UTC
ohmygod.. :)

/squealing so loud

you you are such an awesome writer!!!!

thank you thank you thank you very much for this kisung fic!! this totally made my day.. <3 <33

kisung is so rare but when i do read an awesome one like yours, it is just so jjang!!! my cheeks hurt from smiling from the start but heck yeah ut was so worth it!!! :)

i could so picture this and i love how real it it!!! kyaaa!!! <33 sorry for too much fangirling :)

thanks for sharing this!! :) :)

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akilei May 12 2011, 20:20:30 UTC
I get fifteen exclamation points? xD One for every member of Suju~

Thanks~

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*i love white that makes me a masochist* animearumira01 May 12 2011, 12:55:48 UTC
...i liked it, the first parts were my favorite, the way kibum describe yesung.. in almost everyway that he could..i just wish kibum would someday perform on the same stage with them again and of course as a super junior member ( ... )

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Re: *i love white that makes me a masochist* akilei May 12 2011, 20:19:36 UTC
It's only white roses, not white in general. xD It's a Japanese thing. White is my favorite color, too.

Thanks~

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<3 KISUNG <3 amanda_clarissa October 4 2011, 13:58:23 UTC

I LOVED THIS!!! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND WRITTEN SO WELL!!!

PLEASE WRITE MORE KISUNG STORIES ^.^

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