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[akutsurocksdesu]

SO I WROTE SOMETHING DESU. I DON'T THINK IT'S VERY GOOD BUT I TRIED REALLY HARD DESU!

TITLE: SEMPAI
AUTHOR: DADADADAN
RATING: I DON'T KNOW DESU MAYBE G DESU?

ONCE UPON A TIME I THINK STORIES ARE SUPPOSED TO START WITH ONCE UPON A TIME BUT I'M NOT SURE DESU :\ ANYWAY ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS A BOY. HIS NAME WAS DAN RAN AND HE LIKED TENNIS BUT

Comments

[gekidasadaze]

Your story hurts my eyes.

[akutsurocksdesu]

I'LL TRY HARDER NEXT TIME DESU.

[gekidasadaze]

Good.

[lolitzgod]

Beautiful. ;___; It got me all misty-eyed.

[akutsurocksdesu]

THANK YOU DESU! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

[ikyuunyuukon]

Well... It was cute!
The all-caps makes it a little hard to read though.

[akutsurocksdesu]

NOBODY ELSE THINKS AKUTSU-SEMPAI IS CUTE, DESU.

i can try writing like this i guess desu but it's hard desu. :\

[ikyuunyuukon]

I meant the fic.

Close, but not quite there yet. Maybe you should consider a beta?

[akutsurocksdesu]

LIKE A SEMPAI LIKE AKUTSU-SEMPAI DESU? OMG THAT WOULD BE SO AWESOME DESU BUT NO I COULD NEVER ASK AKUTSU-SEMPAI TO LOOK AT MY WRITING DESU AND BESIDES I DON'T THINK HE READS DESU. :\

[fsshuuukitty]

You should try not using caps lock. Fsshuuu.

[akutsurocksdesu]

like this desu????? 0_0

[fsshuuukitty]

Yes.

[akutsurocksdesu]

...

I TRIED DESU BUT I CAN'T DO IT DESU MAYBE IF I TRY HARDER DESU YES I WILL TRY HARDER AND MAYBE ONE DAY I CAN BE LIKE AKUTSU-SEMPAI DESU I DON'T THINK HE HAS ONE OF THESE DESU BUT HE PROBABLY WOULDN'T WRITE IN CAPS DESU!!!!!!

[bakatsuzuki]

That was worse than gekidasadaze's story.

[akutsurocksdesu]

I'M SORRY DESU :( :( :( BUT I'M SURE HIS STORY WAS AWESOME DESU. <3

[bakatsuzuki]

It wasn't.

[akutsurocksdesu]

THAT'S NOT VERY NICE DESU! :((((