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[akutsurocksdesu]

SO I WROTE SOMETHING DESU. I DON'T THINK IT'S VERY GOOD BUT I TRIED REALLY HARD DESU!

TITLE: SEMPAI
AUTHOR: DADADADAN
RATING: I DON'T KNOW DESU MAYBE G DESU?

ONCE UPON A TIME I THINK STORIES ARE SUPPOSED TO START WITH ONCE UPON A TIME BUT I'M NOT SURE DESU :\ ANYWAY ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS A BOY. HIS NAME WAS DAN RAN AND HE LIKED TENNIS BUT

Comments

[hanamura]

You're so wee!! You look like Echizen-kun!! :"> My name is Hanamura Aoi, and I think you have the potential to be a masterpiece if you let me guide you.

I sense great potential! :x

[bigbadakutsu]

The fuck is this?

Lose the goddamn endless 'desu', Taichi.

[notshirochan]

There's a thing called comma.

I think I got into one now.

[betterprofessor]

You're on the right track, Dan-kun. I'll be waiting to see if you ever manage to come up with fanfiction in your Akutsu-sempai's style. :))