Comments | alassenya: Debts, Dates and Denial Ch 12 (Charlie/Shark NC17)

alassenya

Debts, Dates and Denial Ch 12 (Charlie/Shark NC17)

Aug 05, 2006 10:04

In which Charlie makes a most unwelcome discovery.
For introduction, warnings and disclaimers please see Chapter One.
( Chapter 12 )

fics, ddd

Comments 23

babydazzle August 5 2006, 01:19:54 UTC

alassenya August 5 2006, 01:57:53 UTC

Thank you! And yes, you have to wait another week. Sorry about that *Mwahahahah!*

babydazzle August 5 2006, 03:14:28 UTC

alassenya August 5 2006, 05:04:09 UTC

I've had more practice!

daydreambeleevr August 5 2006, 08:18:19 UTC

"Thanks. I'll get the key off Rory in a minute."

Chris gave him a slightly odd look but said nothing and continued on his way.

I do like this Chris. He's a smart man, and he misses nothing. Including Charlie calling The Shark "Rory". bwahahaha.

I liked how Charlie took such good care of Rory even when he was pissed off at him. I'm also glad he spoke up just a little. Not enough to get his face pushed in, but enough to just say back off a bit! Are you gonna tell us what was in that brown envelope?

kerry =)

alassenya August 5 2006, 11:54:51 UTC

Thank you! I didn't want anyone to forget that Charlie has a temper, even when he knows it'll get him in trouble. he envelope isn't important - it was just a way of letting people know that Rory isn't his first name. In fact, "Rory" isn't his second name, either, but I haven't been able to work out how to get fit that into the narrative, so it may have to wait until one of the C100 stories.

mystery_ink August 5 2006, 22:46:33 UTC

Perfect... although, dammit, now I'm hungry! *L*! Excellent ending.

alassenya August 6 2006, 00:33:47 UTC

Thank you - I had to stop and cook an omelette when I got to that bit (I can't manage pastry) *g*

pippins_penny August 5 2006, 22:53:54 UTC

I love how their relationship has shifted and that Charlie is finding himself falling for him. I wonder what Rosry is thinking about all of this?

alassenya August 6 2006, 00:37:43 UTC

Well, it was inevitable that Charlie was going to fall for him (it's a romance, after all!). As to what Rory's thinking... it'll be a while before we find out for sure. Until then there's only Charlie's speculation. *g*

pippins_penny August 6 2006, 05:51:00 UTC

Sorry! Typo! Rosry? HAHA! Nice!

msilverstar August 6 2006, 06:19:32 UTC

I'm so liking this, it feels easy, not huge angst, just a lot of hitches and odd moments of affection and annoyance, sometimes at the same time. Really satisfying.

alassenya August 6 2006, 13:51:44 UTC

Thank you - I wanted to convey a sort of "two steps forward, one step back" progress, so it looks like I'm succeeding.