Debts, Dates and Denial Ch 13 (Charlie/Shark, NC-17)

[alassenya]

In which Charlie realises that Rory is a stubborn git with no common sense whatsoever.

For introduction, warnings and disclaimers please see Chapter One.

Comments

[mystery_ink]

Wow. If Rory is fighting his own feelings, I can only imagine what it was like for him to see Charlie's face as they fucked. Brilliant idea!

[alassenya]

Yes, I think it was a bit overwhelming for him, as well as for Charlie. Stay tuned for more developments!

[mystery_ink]

OOooooo!!!!! *excited*

[alassenya]

*looks smug*

[babydazzle]

[alassenya]

Thank you - there's definitely more sex in future chapters (though not in Ch 14, I'm afraid to say). Don't miss next Friday - poor Charlie's in for a bit of a shock.

[daydreambeleevr]

It was no more than any nurse would have done, he told himself. Nothing more than that.

He was getting very good at this denial thing.

hee. I like the few slips Rory let lose, smiling at Charlie's return from his job and when he ruffled his hair. Sweeter then he normally likes to be, I'm sure. and the sexeh way you had them going at it. *fans self*

berry berry nice!

kerry =)

[alassenya]

Thank you - it's hard to show Rory trying not to show his feelings (if that makes sense), so it's great that readers are picking up on the subtleties.

[pippins_penny]

I agree with what everyine else said! Really great chapter!

[alassenya]

Thank you - I'm really happy that everyone is enjoying it and making positive comments.

[dizzydame]

Eeee. I love this story so much. *g*

[alassenya]

Thank you - I'm glad that you like it and that you've taken the time to say so.