Comments | alassenya: Debts, Dates and Denial Ch 16 (Charlie/Shark NC-17)

alassenya

Debts, Dates and Denial Ch 16 (Charlie/Shark NC-17)

Aug 26, 2006 10:30

In which Charlie and Rory reach the end of the Agreement and go their separate ways.
For introduction, warnings and disclaimers please see Chapter One.
( Chapter 16 )

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Comments 35

elouisa August 26 2006, 08:30:54 UTC

This is just brilliant. I've just re-read from the beginning again and am enamoured by this 'relationship'. I can't wait to see how this ends for them both. It's almost heartbreaking seeing Charlie's feelings develop against his will.

Thank you so much for sharing.

alassenya August 26 2006, 09:18:05 UTC

Thank you for saying that. I'm really pleased that so many people are reading and commenting - it warms my writerly heart!

jacqui_hw August 26 2006, 08:31:25 UTC

Oh so painful. My heart's all clenchy now. Beautiful chapters (I was so happy to have two to read *g*) but a week is such a long time to wait.

alassenya August 26 2006, 09:19:10 UTC

Ah well, even the best-laid plans go agley, as the poet said. And a week's not so very long, after all.

owlgrey August 26 2006, 09:48:48 UTC

You cannot leave us there!

alassenya August 26 2006, 10:30:32 UTC

Only for a few more days, honest!

lancslass August 26 2006, 15:11:58 UTC

WOW, so so good, and your leaving us hanging.
It's the only time I wish for time to fast forward a week. I'm going to have to keep myself busy so time will fly.
Have you decided how many chapters you're going to post? I would like it to keep going forever.
Such cleaver writing. You are so talented.

alassenya August 26 2006, 22:09:40 UTC

There are only two more chapters, and they'll both be posted next week. There will also be an epilogue, but it's not finished yet, so that will have to wait.

alassenya August 26 2006, 22:10:48 UTC

Oh - and thank you so much for commenting. I really appreciate the fact that so many people have taken the time and effort to tell me how much they are enjoying the story.

ptyca August 26 2006, 20:35:23 UTC

And the award for being the Most Evil and Awesome Person At The Same Time In The Whole World goes to..

alassenya!

...mate.. really.. leaving us LIKE THAT.

On the other hand - WOMYN, THIS IS SO BEYOND AMAZING.

alassenya August 26 2006, 22:13:52 UTC

MWAHAHAHA!!

At least I didn't put "The End" after it - there will be more, and you only have to wait a week (six days now).

Thank you for commenting - it's fantastic when people say they are enjoying the story.