Tribute to the Lost

Dec 02, 2011 17:38


A/N: Ai shet, you know meee. Always straying away from WIB,INE, yet always updating. Anyways... I wrote this in memory of one of my friends, and because I couldn't stop crying in school during the memorial for one of our city's police officers. I didn't know the guy, but it was the fact teachers kept tapping into the death topic. Most of my readers ( Read more... )

nc-17, jeti

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onetrue9 January 21 2012, 23:52:10 UTC
OMG YOU TROLL, STAHP!!! D8
...fine. I'll edit when time lends itself to my earliest convenience.. I have a group project to be done and I'm not gonna re-read it cuz it'll make me want to fix everything right now LOL /resists
PUNCTUATION, QURL, P U N C T U A T I O N!!!
I really wanted to do the whole time skip thing. :(

Kekeke well at least I'm first... :I

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ali_the_scwag January 22 2012, 00:02:56 UTC
What whole time skip thing, nigga? WHERE IS MY BAD PUNCTUATION!? I thought you already editted this!? There's hardly any additions!! YOU BE SCARIN' ME NOW. WUT. WUT.
Is being 'first' anything special? -.-

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onetrue9 January 22 2012, 04:12:33 UTC
....oh awk cuz I didn't LOL /runs away
.________. Um, it be errwhurr...You see, there's this thing called a period that is generally used to mark tye end of a sentence. For example, I correctly placed a period at the end of this sentence, right about here. <3

Ofc it is!!! For a lot of things... /:) Omg hahaha inappropro XD

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onetrue9 January 22 2012, 04:15:08 UTC
:( My phone doesn't like me atm... *the -_- smh

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ajinkan January 22 2012, 01:41:05 UTC
holy,its too awesome,im ur ninja reader that u perhaps too kind to put my name on ur pm list in ssf,i always read every pieces of ur fic,one-shots and multi-shots but dis one,i need to comment it,its too beautiful,toooo beautiful,i like they way u potrayed JeTi's characters,and their moments,some is way too funny when they announced their engagement,Yuri's cameo,and some is romantic while the last part is sad,the ending which i can say,happy and sad in the same time,happy as Jessica's voice is the last voice that been heard by Tiffany and sad to see Jessica put a distance after Tiffany's death,but at least she has 'their' beautiful daughter.:)*thumbs up*

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ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 06:03:47 UTC
NINJA READERS WELCOME. It's always nice to get silent readers out. xD So hey qurl hey~ Unless your male~ Hey boy hey~! LOL. YOU REALLY THINK IT'S BEAUTIFUL~ :"> lol, you have to admit the daughter brightened up the atmosphere of the fic immensely. <3
Thank you for reading!!!! *thumbs up*!

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ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 05:58:58 UTC
Heyyy~ The past/present set up was so hard to mesh. >_< Thank you!! I appreciate your compliments. :>

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ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 05:57:00 UTC
Hey qurrrrl~ So I know this is hella late and alll; how you z'oiiiin? Is this really your favorite? Don't you like its length too? LOL, I TOOK SO LONG WRITING THIS. I wrote this when we were still talking on my "I Like Cats" post; remember when I said I'll probably write a diff fic before I even get back to my others? This is it. XP And I'm also so JeTi deprived!!!
I should go work on my thug fic now... Shit, I can't think of how to move it along.

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carrot_ssi January 22 2012, 13:29:09 UTC
ahh!! this was amazing! from your description, i figured that something bad happened to tiffany. i liked the way the flashbacks built up to the revelation of what occurred. their relationship was really sweet too. loved this!

i love all your work tbh. i've been reading your stuff for awhile and am commenting now that i have a lj. pink umbrellas remains the hottest jeti i've ever read, and i get really excited when i see an update for wib, ine.

can't wait to see more from you! you're my favorite jeti author :)

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ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 05:49:00 UTC
I'M YOUR FAVORITE JETI AUTHOR. I. AM. YOUR. FAVORITE. AHHHH!!!!
I NEED TO SHOW THIS TO MY BETAS!!!! WAAAAAHAHAHAHA!! THANK YOU FOR SUCH GRAND PRAISING! I TRY SO HARD. AWWWWWE SHUCKS. YOU ARE TOO NICE.
Pink Umbrellas was hot though? MAN, THANK YOU. That was one of my first and one of my hardest to write. >_< WIB,INE, I think everyone has to admit that one was awkward in the beginning. Looking back on it, the beginning sucks super dick. I can't even read a chapter without cringing.

I needa inform my betas on how cool I am now. THANK YOU FOR READING AND FOR THIS COMMENT. <33333333

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