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ali_the_scwag

Tribute to the Lost

Dec 02, 2011 17:38

A/N: Ai shet, you know meee. Always straying away from WIB,INE, yet always updating. Anyways... I wrote this in memory of one of my friends, and because I couldn't stop crying in school during the memorial for one of our city's police officers. I didn't know the guy, but it was the fact teachers kept tapping into the death topic. Most of my readers ( Read more... )

nc-17, jeti

Comments 38

Wow! ext_321739 January 22 2012, 17:05:18 UTC

Thank you for the PM.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Almost cried because Tiffany wasn't able to be them physically, but she will forever be remembered.
Pretty happy that JeTi were able to reproduce a mini Tiffany? Cute.
Keep up the good work.
Fighting!

Re: Wow! ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 05:51:28 UTC

AYE STRAWBS. YOU SUCH A FAITHFUL READER. <3
I know it's close to impossible for women to reproduce, but did you know- I think it was in Britain- they've learned how to make sperm from a woman's bone marrow due to the mixture of chromosomes or somethin'? LOL.
Thank you for reading!!

eevanlvis January 22 2012, 18:46:12 UTC

This is so good. Fics involving death don't work for me, well some do. This is one of them. Loved it.
Oh and Jessica/Tiffany bickering was nice :D
Thank you :)

ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 05:52:30 UTC

I worked hard on trying to make the death seem as normal and feeble as possible! It's not the death that matters, IT'S THE MEMORIES!!! RIGHT, QURL? RIGHT!?
Thank you for reading. <3

eevanlvis January 23 2012, 06:57:19 UTC

YES! And that's why I said it worked for me.
/you are one hyper person!! :D

ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 07:26:17 UTC

Ah, I just had a good day. :>
SUCH A GOOD DAY IT WAS. I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THIIIS.

windyheartsnsd January 23 2012, 03:03:58 UTC

This fic is really nice to read! I love all those Jeti bickering ~Kkkkk XDXD , but, don't ya think Tiff's death was a lil .... ya know....awkward? ??or it just me, but i think it a lil bit rush ... It's still good anyways ~~~keep up the good work and pls.update the norther fix soon~ HWAITAENG~~

ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 05:54:06 UTC

Okay, so the death was a little awk... I'm really uneducated on how people pass away and everything so... LOL. I didn't know how I was supposed to write someone dying! Thank you for reading!! HWAITAENG!!!

windyheartsnsd January 23 2012, 10:49:08 UTC

Well, it's not THAT awkward, it just, ya know, seems like Fany was actually joking when she called Jess ... But overall, the fic is really nice, i love it~

ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 12:17:03 UTC

LOL. Well Jess did think she was joking too. Hahahaha.
Thank you for loving this. :>

apatrickg January 23 2012, 10:49:07 UTC

D'awww little Tiffany and Jessica were so cute. It's nice that we got to see them grow over the years. Oh God the Chewbacca part,bahaha.I guess it was the power of fanfiction that made Fany reproduce right? haha. The ending was a bit rushed, but s'all good overall. ^^

ali_the_scwag January 23 2012, 12:16:22 UTC

I like kid!Jeti! I was also fond of my star wars reference. xD And yes, the power of fanfiction. Although you have to admit, the daughter really lightened up the atmosphere. Hahaha. The ending was a bit rushed since I finished the purpose of my fic a little after I brought in the daughter. <3 Thanks for reading.

snsdforever9 January 24 2012, 00:50:42 UTC

what can i say?
simply amazing(:
it made me cry X__X first time i ever read a fic that made me cry(:

ali_the_scwag January 24 2012, 02:42:41 UTC

HEY! YOU! When will you ever write another smut!? I hate writing my own smuts! >_<
Thanks for reading though. ;D

snsdforever9 January 27 2012, 04:29:56 UTC

ahahah(: dont worry. (: ill get around to it(: ive been so busyX__x but i got like 4 fics that are half written(: i can probably upload monday or tuesday!

onetrue9 January 25 2012, 05:23:34 UTC

O M G YOU GAIZ KNOW EACH OTHER LOLWAT WELL I SUPPOSE IT'S ONLY LOGICAL, BUT STILL.... ._________.