Tribute to the Lost

Dec 02, 2011 17:38


A/N: Ai shet, you know meee. Always straying away from WIB,INE, yet always updating. Anyways... I wrote this in memory of one of my friends, and because I couldn't stop crying in school during the memorial for one of our city's police officers. I didn't know the guy, but it was the fact teachers kept tapping into the death topic. Most of my readers ( Read more... )

nc-17, jeti

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rachelconrad January 24 2012, 02:01:50 UTC
Well written fic! Thanks so much for writing this! Just in time when I need me some JeTi lovin' ROFL. That part where Sica rejected Jihae was so awesome! I was so afraid she was gonna give in to her urges, but noooooo.... the Power of JeTi trumps alll ROARRRR!

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ali_the_scwag January 24 2012, 02:43:35 UTC
Hey qurrrl, thanks for reading. <3 I took extra time on the Jihae part! It was really hard to simplify things without making it awkward or anything. e_e thank you for such kind praising!!

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yoongable January 24 2012, 10:31:19 UTC
You know what's weird? I just made an account on LJ to comment here and nothing else LOL
Seriously man... this fic is just so good like really. The ending... it is a nice ending but since I don't like the idea of Tiffany dying so tragically after such a beautiful love story I kinda changed it in my mind and they lived happily ever after... yes, the house of Jessica and Tiffanys.
Anyway I just wanted to let you know how good you are at writing and that I look forward for your next works :)
btw I'm having an inner conflict as to whether stalk your fics here or on ssf..

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ali_the_scwag January 25 2012, 00:52:10 UTC
LOL. It's much easier to stalk my fics here! Especially since I hate SSF having rules on fanfics. >_> I feel like a child on ssf. They remove all the good stuff! And since you just joined the site, I'm guessing you don't know about soshipops? SNSD Fanfic LJ site! NC-17 and more explicit stories than ssf's kiddie stuff! I'm glad you enjoyed this fic. x) The 'tragic' part was needed for the purpose of the fic. T_T sorry.

I think this has to be my best one yet though! I usually don't get so much love on one fic!

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great piece of writing hash99 January 25 2012, 04:33:43 UTC
you has just become one of my favorite writers.
please do write another piece of story that can relate to a reality. a gay life reality to be precise :D

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Re: great piece of writing ali_the_scwag January 25 2012, 05:03:27 UTC
I've been meaning to do one of those. e_e I usually base stories off experience, though. Hmmm. I think once I finish wib,ine, that'll be my next on-going. Although, it most def won't be as long as wib,ine. T_T long as shit.

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ext_557465 February 27 2012, 18:28:11 UTC
Just like you, dear author, I don't really like reading angst fics. Those always make me depressed for the whole day *sigh*
So, what I liked about your fic is how you unfolded JeTi's backstory. Jessica going back to their neighborhood, visiting all the places where she made memories with Tiffany... That made me feel how their love kept on growing each passing year and made me feel all warm inside.
I also liked the comical moments with troll!Yul and Jessica's attempt to break up with Tiffany turning into Jess being beaten up by Tiff with a baseball bat ROFL
Even though Fany died... I didn't feel that depressed at the end of the story because their love will forever live in their daughter's existence.

I loved your fic. Thank you for this amazing piece <333

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ali_the_scwag February 28 2012, 01:45:29 UTC
I was laughing to myself when I was writing the bat part too! xD I'm so sorry for the angst. T_T It was the purpose... I INTENDED FOR THE DAUGHTER TO ENLIGHTEN THE FIC. <3 YES.

Thank you for reading. <3 I luff yo comments. :*

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sunyeon14 July 25 2012, 21:55:44 UTC
I read the last part and 'Kiss the Rain' was playing....DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I CRIED?!

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ali_the_scwag July 26 2012, 04:32:41 UTC
I can only imagine... And this comment is hella late. Are you back tracking my journal? LOL

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sunyeon14 July 27 2012, 16:31:27 UTC
Oh yea, hahahaha. I'm rereading every single story you did. Hahahaha. I'm ur loyal reader ;)

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