I need to relax... my heart is beating so fast right now, I was as afraid as Aiji must have benn all the time... Great job my dear!
there were sentences that hurt to the core, others were close to make me smile... I will read this about ten times again I think.. It's so full of emotions! But.... what is Jun feeling? What? Hedoesn't seem to be too sure abut this, is the second kiss some kind of experiment? Or is it because he feels so sorry for Aiji, too? What to write now...
that would be a good last part you know... the last sentences really do it, he can dream again... he wants to share his dreams... can one possibly get a greater present than that?
What I meant to say in this, is that Jun still doesn't realize what's he's feeling in 100%. But it's not like he's only feing sorry for Aiji. It's not because of that. He has these glimpses of being complete, of being totally at peace and that's what happenes when he kisses Aiji ^^" he's just acting upon those emotions that make him feel that he's somewhere he belongs. not thinking what are they... uuuh i'm confusing this up aren't I? -.-
a greater present...? well I could think of few but that would rise the rating of this story XD
... *exhales finally* ... wooooow... you want to kill me or what? @_@; *laugsh* At first i thought he would really go away now and i could have slapped aiji for not looking <<;;;; but this now... YAY *giggles* VEry well written.. *has to get her breath back* @_@ *feels dizzy* @_@
ah sorry honey! belive me or not, I was scared that he would leave, while I was writing >_< but it seems like it's a day for holding our breaths, I had to remind myself to breath while I was writing... and earier on, negiyou's part... and no sunshine, I don't want to kill you *pat pat*
*purrs* hai @_@ breathtaking day @_@ *still dizzy* @_@ I swear if this continues for longer i'll collaps @_@ *laughs* Nyaaa you both do such a great job ;______; *amazed* i dunno how you manage it to write it like this... @_@;
haha, I see this collab is taking it's victims... XD i'm so happy you're reading this hun... I love this collab, even if I say my parets suck, or they're crappy or I apologize... but it's like double love because it has readers ^^
Can you imagine something like this: on my right shoulder there is a tiny little devil K-chan, going crazy and screaming at Jun to finaly make up his mind and stop tormenting Aiji and realize his feelings and be a man and do what he is supposed to do (I shall skip some of the vocabulary and the graphic description as some of them would be considered as rude and offending) AND on the other shoulder there is something what with a big dose of imagination reminds both K-chan and an angel - which weeps the eyes out, sniffling like crazy, wetting my shirt muttering some words like 'touched my heart to the very core', 'so much love on the verge of losing it', 'if Jun wouldn't go back they should have their asses kicked'... Ahm... 'scuse me for the last one, it slipped. Anyway, I can just feel how much Jun is torn and confused right now and I just can't write any more comments kitten I need to read on!
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there were sentences that hurt to the core, others were close to make me smile... I will read this about ten times again I think.. It's so full of emotions!
But.... what is Jun feeling? What? Hedoesn't seem to be too sure abut this, is the second kiss some kind of experiment? Or is it because he feels so sorry for Aiji, too?
What to write now...
that would be a good last part you know... the last sentences really do it, he can dream again... he wants to share his dreams... can one possibly get a greater present than that?
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What I meant to say in this, is that Jun still doesn't realize what's he's feeling in 100%. But it's not like he's only feing sorry for Aiji. It's not because of that. He has these glimpses of being complete, of being totally at peace and that's what happenes when he kisses Aiji ^^" he's just acting upon those emotions that make him feel that he's somewhere he belongs. not thinking what are they... uuuh i'm confusing this up aren't I? -.-
a greater present...? well I could think of few but that would rise the rating of this story XD
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Actually I was thinking about all that, too but I didn't find the rigt words to express it - easy to say now , i know, but it's true^^.
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aah ^^" so I'm glad we make things clear for each other ^^
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wooooow... you want to kill me or what? @_@; *laugsh*
At first i thought he would really go away now and i could have slapped aiji for not looking <<;;;; but this now...
YAY *giggles*
VEry well written.. *has to get her breath back* @_@ *feels dizzy* @_@
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but it seems like it's a day for holding our breaths, I had to remind myself to breath while I was writing... and earier on, negiyou's part...
and no sunshine, I don't want to kill you *pat pat*
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I swear if this continues for longer i'll collaps @_@ *laughs*
Nyaaa you both do such a great job ;______; *amazed* i dunno how you manage it to write it like this... @_@;
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i'm so happy you're reading this hun... I love this collab, even if I say my parets suck, or they're crappy or I apologize... but it's like double love because it has readers ^^
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on the other shoulder there is something what with a big dose of imagination reminds both K-chan and an angel - which weeps the eyes out, sniffling like crazy, wetting my shirt muttering some words like 'touched my heart to the very core', 'so much love on the verge of losing it', 'if Jun wouldn't go back they should have their asses kicked'...
Ahm...
'scuse me for the last one, it slipped.
Anyway, I can just feel how much Jun is torn and confused right now and I just can't write any more comments kitten I need to read on!
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