part 3

[aliale]

...ok someone shoot me...
.__________________________.
so sorry...I don't think me writing Kohta works out... ._.

as usual, not beta-ed

Comments

[bluewings5]

Whaaaaa this is good!!! *pokes*
Haha Kohta protecting Jun ^-^ *giggles*
And the end!! *laugsh* XDDDD
LUV IT! XDD

*hides* uh oh.. my turn now.. ;;;;;

[aliale]

yes it is baby :0
can't wait for the Pretty One to speak up ^^

[bluewings5]

ngyuuu ;_;
the boney pretty one.. *chuckles* oh man.. *laughs*

[aliale]

come on I can't wait for your part ^^
*bounces*
mah...I'm staying at Tekko's tonite too...if eveyrthing goes like it's supposed to, I'll be online on Sunday... ><

[negiyou]

WOW!
I'm spoiled by my brothers perfect Kohta, but this one is stunning as well! DonÄt you ever dare saying you can't to that or crap... *claps hands*
He's cool! I like his way of thinking so much!

and wohoo, Jun just did say the right things, ne? *laughes*
it's really really cool and......... man, how Kohta describes Jun made me blush. I feel honored in a way, hard to describe. But since I'm writing Jun, I feel like I have to be proud Kohta loves him th eway I write him......stupid, i know >.

[aliale]

maaan get Oni into writing this XDDDD
well i was really scared you wouldn't like it and so...
mah glad *sighs with relief again*

I feel like I have to be proud Kohta loves him th eway I write him tyou know...this sentence actually makes sense XDDD

[negiyou]

sense despite of the tons of typos -_-

YOU get oni into writing, I gave up on her.

[aliale]

ah you know...GMTA *winks*

ME?? why the hell me? *blinks*

[matsudaira]

Nyaaaw, smiling Kohta is almost... disturbing XD But it's nice to see the other half of Murata Brothers acting like... a human ^_^ He's so sweet all lovey-dovey with Jun :D And the ending just killed me XD

[aliale]

*snickers*
they ARE human after all *laughs* besides Jun is lovey-dovey too, so they fit.... XD

[azamir]

*__*

I never thought I'd find a Kohta cute, but here he really is... in a manly, rather mature and very much loveable way^^

I'm gonna add you, so I don't have to search fpr the parts of the collab...^^

[aliale]

wee~~ll.... this is the first time I'm actually trying to write Kohta, so I have no idea how he'll turn out later on *scratches head*
writing Kirito is so much easier....