Title: Tell the Truth Now
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairings: Will/Finn, Puck, mentions of Kurt/Sam, Rachel/Mike, Tina/Artie, various Gleeks, Sue, Emma, Principal Figgins
Summary: A fundraiser gone wrong and Will and Finn finally being honest with each other. And there's pie.
AN: Part of my series other stories being
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And I love Will for being messed up and a music nerd and an evil genuis. But it was just so sweet and so perfect. Every part was necessary and nervous. Finn's headspace is just captured so clearly. And I'm gushing but I just love this so much.
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I wanted it to feel really earned when they finally made the decision to just go for it and reach out for that chance at happiness and it means a lot that you think I managed it.
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Totally get it. And I love characters who are a little messed up. It makes them more human in the end to a reader. Plus they're so much fun to play with. Who wants a well adjusted character anyway?
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Gah, I'm so greedy. I mean, they ACTUALLY GOT TOGETHER which I wasn't sure was actually going to happen, and they actually came to an understanding and didn't just have guilty sex or something and then try and work stuff out later. And even though I know that this is probably right and it's gonna be amazing and fluffy, a part of me is still like YOU'RE BOTH HARD, WHY AREN'T YOU FUCKING FOR MY ENTERTAINMENT?
Anyway, a pie making Will's nose bleed is kind of genius. So was his plan to get funding for the club. Your plots are always amazing, and things always work out in an unexpected but awesome way. Finn's big speech was reaaally good, too. It kind of covered everything you could possibly think of. o.o;; So yeah.
*looks forward to tentative coupley-ness*
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Sorry for the no sex, but come on you know if they did it now it'd end in so much angst and heartache and badness---and I'm not sure if I'm trying to talk you out of it, or me into it with that line of argument...
Glad you enjoyed Will's assault via baked goods. I have no idea where the idea came from and when I first thought of it, I never would have guessed that such a small idea would turn into this almost 8,000 word monster.
But Finn just started talking and he wouldn't stop.
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Yeah, I totally get it. It's more responsible and realistic than the usual impulsive guilty fuck, and hopefully it works out better in the long run too.
xD The thing is, the more I think about it, getting hit by an actual pie would really hurt. There's a lot of pastry in there, and I bet Sue's pretty strong, so yeah. I think usually people just use whipped cream on a paper plate for that kind of thing, so you get the mess but not much force. Not that I've ever thrown food at people before, because I'm not childish like that. >.>
If small idea = longer fic, I need to start writing shorter prompts/comments. :P Or just make Finn talk and don't let anyone interrupt him.
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awesome story, soooo cute!
my fav line: If he’d had a bit longer to prepare, he’d probably be able to throw together a nice PowerPoint presentation. With graphs. eben though it's not cute or angsty, like the rest xD but i hat do laugh SO hard on this line xD genius!
will/finn are really cute together. *siigh* i'm out of words - again.
btw - love the idea of Will leaning on Finn - you had probably guessed already, becaue my icon kinda gives it away ;D
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