Comments | alicefactor: The Heart Never Lies [1/?]

alicefactor

The Heart Never Lies [1/?]

Apr 14, 2009 19:27

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.angst, rating: pg13, :ichigo/ishida, .mpreg, !fanfic, *bleach, :ichigo/renji, .language

Comments 21

mitsu_syusuke April 15 2009, 09:04:24 UTC

How could Ichigo hurts him like that..
poor uryu.. T^T

ivy

alicefactor April 16 2009, 05:19:39 UTC

Awe, I can't promise it gets better int he next chapter... since i haven't started it... but we'll see!

alice

freyalilith April 16 2009, 02:26:04 UTC

Oh wow, I absolutely love this. I cant wait to see the rest of it now!!!!!! Your ichigo is such a noob, how could he do this to poor Uryuu!!!! And go Uryuu for giving Ichigo some back!! Hell yeah! Cant wait for more of your work!!!!

alicefactor April 16 2009, 05:21:01 UTC

Thank you so much! Your opinion means a lot! Haha well Ishida doesn't seem like the kind to let it all 'just happen', he's a fighter. I know Ighigo was a douche but, hopefully he will improve, right?

uri_sensei April 16 2009, 02:59:39 UTC

Ichigo's such a jerk...Uryuu has an excuse to be upset, he's having a baby! The angst is getting interesting, and the plot loks really good. I'm very eager for the next chapter, it's really interesting!

alicefactor April 16 2009, 05:22:05 UTC

I LOVE YOUR ICON!

haha. anyways, thanks for the wonderful comment. I'm hoping this fic takes off =D

kurorinslvr April 16 2009, 03:31:11 UTC

this is interesting. I really wonder if everything will be okay but right it's uncertain. I look forward for the next chapter

alicefactor April 16 2009, 05:23:09 UTC

RIGHT! Thank you 10 fold for commenting! feedback is great! I hope I can satisfy you with the next chapter!

kurorinslvr April 18 2009, 23:38:36 UTC

i've been thinking about this fic lately, but i got the feeling that maybe Ishida might looses the baby,

alicefactor April 21 2009, 04:54:35 UTC

I'm not sure about that, but we'll see.