Delinquent [13/24]

Apr 27, 2008 00:04

Delinquent [13/24] by all_tattooed
Frank/Gerard [NC-17 - language, violence, crime, mentions of drugs & alcohol, sex ...etc.]
RPS. Don't know. Don't own. No harm intended.
~4191 words.

Summary: When Frank goes to Juvy, his counselor reforms him in a questionable manner.

Thanks to skelterellax for beta'ing. xo

Con-Crit welcome. Comments are nice.

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tunny_13 April 26 2008, 19:37:27 UTC
I love this fic more than I can even describe.
And that's hard! I'M A DESCRIPTIVE PERSON!

Ah you're amazing, m'dear, I can't wait for the next part xx

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all_tattooed April 27 2008, 23:07:09 UTC
Aww. *blushes*

Thank you.

I adore you icon btw.

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ikle_pattikins April 26 2008, 19:52:12 UTC
stupid bert calling gerard.

that was so funny when gerard was all like he's not my brother he's my student

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x_missdarko_x April 26 2008, 21:09:59 UTC
I love Frank's little tantrum, it's such a good reminder of his age and his insecurity concerning Gerard. And yeah, fuck Bert. Though he makes an excellent character in your story.

I also love how you started this chapter, right where you left us. It's like, "yeah, remember how they had that AMAZING sex last time, well, than this happenend..". Like I need a reminder! That scene pops up randomly in my head anyway. There are so much sweet, slow, smooth vibes attached to this story. I never would've thought that in the beginning. Your fic was awesomely funny, but who would've guessed the hotness and sweetness would conquer my heart so easily.

I'm a big fan of this fic, even if I read it in a black/white/pink background with hearts all over it (not saying it's ugly, just PINK). :D I will love to read more ...

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all_tattooed April 26 2008, 21:22:05 UTC
Thank You so much. I'm sure that by saying that this story as turned sweet you meant that in a good way, but I'm trying so hard to make it funny still, at least when it's appropriate, and I guess in the last chapter espcially that wouldn't have been appropriate. XD

Ugh, and seriously, I would just love it if you insulted my journal. I have been meaning to change it for so long, but I just couldn't be bothered. I need a kick up the ass, I don't know what posessed me to do it in the first place.

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x_missdarko_x April 29 2008, 22:58:16 UTC
Dude, it still is a funny story. Yeah, definitely. Just also sweet and smooth and sexy. :)

Well, maybe your roommate manipulated your mind by making you listen to Avril Lavigne on repeat while you were asleep. Hence the pink and the hearts. So, no changing background but do changing icon? Uhu, makes sense...

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xdarkk_lustx April 26 2008, 22:04:11 UTC
xxx
Goodness,Gerard STILL makes me laugh XD.
Video store guy...ahah XD.
I was wondering why you didn't update,yo.Glad you did.<3
:D.
xxx
-Pansy

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all_tattooed April 27 2008, 06:04:42 UTC
I LOVE YOU for pointing that out, but honestly, skelterellax came up with it, hence, she is my wife.

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blueautopsy April 26 2008, 22:33:07 UTC
wooooo. i have been waiting for this <3
great update hunni. i love that gerard is so
calm when frank loses his head. bless.
can't wait for the next part
xxxxx

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all_tattooed April 27 2008, 23:09:33 UTC
Thank you. XD

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