Delinquent [17/24]

[all_tattooed]

Delinquent [17/24] by all_tattooed
Frank/Gerard [NC-17 - language, violence, crime, mentions of drugs & alcohol, sex ...etc.]
RPS. Don't know. Don't own. No harm intended.
~4039 words.

Summary: When Frank goes to Juvy, his counselor reforms him in a questionable manner.

Thanks to skelterellax for beta'ing. xo

Dedications: gee4president & x_missdarko_x

Con-Crit welcome. Comments are nice.

Comments

[lovelycoquette]

I steal this chapter's comment virginity!
-runs off to read-

[lovelycoquette]

Kudos to Frank for not saying he was sorry. At least, as much as it stinks, he was honest. I would be the same way. Yeah, it was horrible thing to do to another humn being, but honestly, you have those moments where you don't give a shit. So yeah, kudos to Frank.

And Gerard's reaction was perfectttttt. Gaaaah. Killing me here. Softly.

And obviously they can't go back to the platonic counselor-student relationship anymore, they've crossed too many lines. It's beyond professional now, and well...bummer.

Poor Gerard, because minus the *relationship*, he's really put himself on the line for Frank and this is how he repays him? tsk tsk.

and lmfao @ the shower scene. geeez.

*very* anxious to see exactly what Gerard plans. I smell...evilness. Or just plain sexual deprivation, whichever is fine. ;D

sorry if this doesn't make sense. just spent my day off babysitting a two-year-old. .________.

xx

[all_tattooed]

lol, nonsense forgiven.

Nah, it's fine, I totally understood everything you said. And thank you. I actually really struggled with how I would make Gerard react, I re-wrote this chapter three time until I as happy with it.

Oh the hard life of a slash writer.

Mind you, I'm in the middle of reading The Dove Keeper for the first time ever so my head is pretty up in the clouds. XD

xoxo

[lovelycoquette]

oh. i know the misery of re-writing shit. the hardknock life of a slash writers. bleh.we both can drown in our sorrows over it. Y/Y

i don't blame you. my entire body still gets a little bit out of sync at the mere thought of that story. *g*

xx

[soul_xonx_fire]

Ahh, jeez.
A mad Gerard is not a Gerard I like. Well, at least when it's a serious mad. It's pretty damn hot when they yell at each other and then do it. But serious mad Gerard, *sigh*
I really wasn't expecting them to go as far as burning Nick's hands. I was honestly surprised, but I can't say I necessarily feel bad for him. I'm sure I would if it were real, at least a tiny bit. :D But a psycho 'I'll kick your ass, and fight with my friends' type of Frank is something I can get used to.

S'good. Very.

x

[all_tattooed]

:) Thanks.

Yeah I'd had the burning hands idea for a while and my beta was like, 'yeah it's good' and I agreed, and then I wrote it I thought, 'ah...too far?' But I couldn't take it back...kinda needs to be this way I guess. :P

xo

[swagneto]

Oh man. You kill me.

♥

[all_tattooed]

XD. I hope it's a good kinda killing.

xo

[swagneto]

Oh yes.

[myazureromance]

aw baybay.
Good update. I really love jeph in this btw.
what Frank did was really bad, but he doesn't realize it and that kills me! I hope Gee fixes that boy. ;] I love how you put so much detail into what Gerard is thinking, and how he is processing the situation. I feel bad for him, having to deal with Frank like that; it makes the plot so dimensional. Serious chapter, yea? maw.

[all_tattooed]

*grins crazily*

Thanks so much.

Yeah I had to put Gerard thoughts out there a bit. So I'm thinking of doing some little extra chapters well not really chapters of the counsel sessions between Gerard and Bob, Pete and Jeph...just to see what Gerard does. Cause I don't even know what he'll do XD

<3

[boobookittifukk]

Frank's such an idiot. He's now put Gerard in an impossible situation. How will Gerard teach Frank to have empathy? Frank should regret what he and his friends have done, but he doesn't seem to care, and Gerard knows that unless he can change that, then Frank will never truly change.

I feel bad for Gerard because he would be feeling so damn helpless by now.

[all_tattooed]

:( Aww, now I feel bad. Damnit!

But I'm glad to know what you think. :D Frank is pretty callous.

[boobookittifukk]

And because of Frank and his friends being idiots, there was NO HOT KINKY OFFICE SEX! *pouts* LOL!