Inconceivable

[alleyalligator]

“This is my favourite part coming up now.  Wait for it… wait for it… and there it is.  That moment when the spirit departs the body, that’s what I live for.  It’s the greatest high there is.”

Personally, I thought the greatest high was the after-kill sex, but Rob never liked it when I disagreed with him, so I just made a non-committal grunt.  It

Comments

[minnesattva]

Reading this was like being punched in the head in a good way :)

[alleyalligator]

LOL!

[n3m3sis42]

Heh, your narrator seems a little naive! I don't think I'd have wanted to broach that topic with a guy like Rob for fear of exactly that result. Very well-written. :D

[alleyalligator]

Sometimes it definitely pays to think before you open your mouth!

[karmasoup]

Oh my - Definitely not as fun as after kill sex!

[alleyalligator]

You think Rob would agree, wouldn't you??

[karmasoup]

I'm guessing that would be one time to wish you'd kept your mouth shut!

[fourzoas]

Absolutely chilling. Masterfully done!

[alleyalligator]

Thank you!

[phoenixejc]

This is disturbing. I mean, obviously that's the point, but there's a lot I don't understand. If I'm going to be creeped out this much, I'd also like some further explanation on why the characters think this is spiritual experiment or why Rob thinks its a good idea to kill (what I am hoping would be) the only person willing to be his partner in this. I get the whole creep factor, but I'd like for it to equally fascinating.

[alleyalligator]

Thanks for your critique - you've given me lots to think about :)