If you keep a mind that's too open, you never know what's going to fall in. Or out...

[alleyalligator]

The babysitter lay mouldering in the bath tub.  Mal kept meaning to do something about her, but then he'd get distracted by more important things like counting the hairs around his belly button or wondering whether anyone from the agency would realise that he didn't actually have any children or if he could get away with ordering another girl in.

Comments

[jem0000000]

Spooky! Or maybe creepy? I like it, though. Especially the digressions -- mmm, digressions... ^_^

[alleyalligator]

The idea was that they were waving food under his nose to see what impact it would have on his fantasies - originally this was just going to be about a drug experiment, but when I took it in a different direction, I decided I liked the humour of food and kept it in. Mmmmm, food...

[jem0000000]

I'm glad you kept it! :)

[alleyalligator]

Thanks! Once I'd decided that the story was going to be his mind on drugs, I had licence to do whatever I liked, which was a lot of fun!

[lawchicky]

Eww- what a creepster!

[alleyalligator]

Just slightly... :P

[minnesattva]

Such fun to read.

[alleyalligator]

Thank you!

[noodledays]

oh.my.goodness.

[alleyalligator]

:D