The Straw That Stirs The Drink

Apr 01, 2012 23:02


Brooke felt a tap on her shoulder.  “What are you doing here?”

She turned around to see Cat sitting behind her.  “Er… seeing a movie?”  She indicated the cinema around her to demonstrate what a stupid question she thought it was.   “I’m on a date.  What are you doing here?  I thought you’d said you were going to stop following me.”

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basric April 2 2012, 19:18:21 UTC
WOW! Now that's a horror story. Loved it.

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alleyalligator April 2 2012, 21:28:31 UTC
Thanks!

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myrna_bird April 2 2012, 19:39:39 UTC
I did not see THAT coming! Great terror tale!

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alleyalligator April 2 2012, 21:29:04 UTC
Thank you! Glad I can still pull out some surprising twists.

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myrna_bird April 3 2012, 00:18:57 UTC
Yeah! That was a doozy!

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lrig_rorrim April 2 2012, 21:50:19 UTC
Nicely creepy. :)

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alleyalligator April 3 2012, 12:10:20 UTC
Thanks!

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medleymisty April 3 2012, 02:37:04 UTC
A story after my own heart, here. And ooh, I even have an appropriate icon.

I really like the twist of how the demon appears differently to Brooke than it does to Dean. And I want to know how Brooke's mind got so twisted that she thinks an angel is helping with her love life by telling her to ritually murder people.

Awesomely done. :)

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alleyalligator April 3 2012, 12:10:05 UTC
Earthly love is less important to her than divine eternity at the side of Our Lord. Allegedly.

I'm glad you enjoyed :D

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notodette April 3 2012, 03:40:30 UTC
Definitely did not see that coming.

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alleyalligator April 3 2012, 12:09:16 UTC
:D

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