Once Upon A Time

[alleyalligator]

Melanie adjusted the hair clip in her daughter’s hair and stepped back to admire the result.

“You look beautiful!”

Molly beamed up at her mother and took her hand to lead her out of their hotel room, downstairs to breakfast.  She’d been looking forward to this trip for months, ever since Melanie had seen the ad for cheap holidays to Disneyland.  As a

Comments

[lawchicky]

AAAAAHHHH! You totally got me. I didn't see that coming at all.

[alleyalligator]

Tee hee!

[basric]

A true horror tale.

[alleyalligator]

Thanks!

[medleymisty]

I was getting a kind of creepy overbearing obsessed feeling from the mother earlier on. Good job! :)

[alleyalligator]

I tried to put in little hints to what was coming so that the clues were there if you were looking. Nothing like a good bit of foreshadowing :D

[mstrobel]

OH MY GOD! That sure knocked me for six! *applauds*

[alleyalligator]

Thanks! It's always nice when an idea you have in advance turns out to fit the prompt perfectly :D

[whipchick]

Auuuughh! So twisted and creepy!

[alleyalligator]

Mwahahahahaaaaaaa!