Once Upon A Time

[alleyalligator]

Melanie adjusted the hair clip in her daughter’s hair and stepped back to admire the result.

“You look beautiful!”

Molly beamed up at her mother and took her hand to lead her out of their hotel room, downstairs to breakfast.  She’d been looking forward to this trip for months, ever since Melanie had seen the ad for cheap holidays to Disneyland.  As a

Comments

[lilycobalt]

Whoa! La de da, this is sweet, OMG SEVERED HAND. This is creepy!

[alleyalligator]

LOL! I love how you summed it up - that comment could have been my entry!

[the_day_setup]

This is just... freakin'... awesome. Of course, I'm also a sick puppy.

[alleyalligator]

Thanks! I like to think that I am appealing to the sick puppy demographic in Idol :oP

[m_malcontent]

Gruesome twist, enjoyed.

[alleyalligator]

Thanks.

[java_fiend]

Oh man. I knew there was a twist coming... didn't expect it to be *that*. lol... well done. I think you make even my creepiness seem like fluffy bunny stuff. ;-)

[alleyalligator]

Dude - you set the bar really high!

This one came to me last week while I was walking around with my daughter - and then the perfect prompt appeared!

[java_fiend]

LOL... what a disturbing idea to come to you while with your daughter!!

[alleyalligator]

IKR? I was just walking along with her and thought "hmmm... what if? Ooooh - that would make a good Idol story!"

[baxaphobia]

Oh an unexpected ending. Creepy! Liked this!

[alleyalligator]

Thanks!