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alliekatgal

New Fic: Small Packages

Jun 05, 2006 11:15

Title: Small Packages

Author: alliekatgal

Rating: Adult

Pairing: HP/SS
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Comments 52

alisanne June 5 2006, 15:42:47 UTC

Ahh! Very sweet. :) And yes, more testing is certainly necessary. It is the scientific method, after all. Loved that!

alliekatgal June 5 2006, 15:45:27 UTC

Thank you! Yes, Severus always likes to do a thorough job, because the data just can't be trusted unless it's reproducable.

alisanne June 5 2006, 19:01:34 UTC

Have you considered cross posting this to snape_potter? You might have already, but I don't remember seeing it. They would like it!

alliekatgal June 5 2006, 23:19:18 UTC

Thanks for your encouragement! I tend not to post to communities, but I'll try it.

jadzia7667 June 5 2006, 20:18:42 UTC

*g* This is so hot, and I love Snape, particularly.

alliekatgal June 5 2006, 22:40:27 UTC

Thank you! I so appreciate your input!

painless_j June 5 2006, 23:59:56 UTC

Aww, small-cock!Harry is my huge kink, together with small-cock!Draco and small-cock!Severus, but I'll take what I can find :)

Really cute, if to borrow a definition from your fic. Thank you!

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 01:48:40 UTC

Glad you liked it! I'm always happy if something hits someone's kinks. For some reason, I've been caught up writing stories where their physical attributes don't conform to what we usually accept as the norm in fanfiction. Harry is usually normal or larger than average, so it was fun to write him as small. And I usually see (and write) Severus as being pale and mostly hairless, so I ended up writing an extremely hairy Severus scene.

sneakypoo2 June 6 2006, 00:27:16 UTC

Awwww... how adorable!! Although I'd like to find a beater's bat and go upside Ron's head for making Harry feel so insecure, major cheers for Severus for making him feel better - literally and figuratively.

Wonderful job!

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 01:53:39 UTC

Thank you! Although Ron will probably grow up and mature, I have a hard time seeing him as anything but immature and insecure, especially when it comes to his relationship with Harry. I tend to think of him as being the type to really be in Harry's face if he ever thought there was something he was better at, or where he perceived himself to have something Harry didn't.

maddiec24 June 6 2006, 00:46:10 UTC

That was absolutely wonderful! You made my night.

And this:

“Does what work? The impotency charm? Yeah, works like a, well, a charm.”

made me giggle uncontrollably, have to explain why to my husband, then giggle some more.

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 01:56:02 UTC

Hee! Somehow, my husband never finds things all that amusing when I try to explain them to him, as I laugh uncontrollably. Last night it was a post about bare feet, and I couldn't stop laughing. Glad it tickled you!