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alliekatgal

New Fic: Small Packages

Jun 05, 2006 11:15

Title: Small Packages

Author: alliekatgal

Rating: Adult

Pairing: HP/SS
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snarry

Comments 52

athenakt June 8 2006, 17:27:05 UTC

"...Yeah, works like a, well, a charm.”

*snorts*

Lovely fic. Short and sweet, if you'll excuse the potential comparison to a certain piece of equipment that you wrote about ;)

alliekatgal June 9 2006, 02:44:02 UTC

Thank you! :)

loussi_leb_ru June 9 2006, 12:37:28 UTC

Harry had the cutest fucking little cock he’d ever seen on a fully grown man.
That was my favorite sentence.*applauds* Splendid work!

Take care
Loussi

alliekatgal June 9 2006, 14:14:42 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

mangobiscuit June 10 2006, 15:46:40 UTC

This was the most contrived pretext for getting Harry and Snape naked that I have ever read. How did they go from a "medical" problem to having sex, with nothing in between?

Seriously, the whole point of Snarry is that they hate one another. If you can't be bothered to get them over that hatred, write Remus/Sirius or something.

The whole thing just reads like a schoolgirl fantasy. And frankly, we don't need to read that.

alliekatgal June 11 2006, 02:31:27 UTC

It was never a medical problem. It was a perceived problem,mainly emotional, which Severus approached in a scientific manner. The premise was that they were already friends, good friends, who each were wishing they were more than friends. While there are many excellent snarry stories which deal with them overcoming their differences, there are also many which start at a point where they have already moved beyond that. Not all Snarry has to be consumed by angst. Each to his own.

taipa24 June 12 2006, 14:30:42 UTC

Oh my God! I loved it! It will become one of my favorite! I read other stroies written by you (best is "Forgetten Encourter"). Could I ask you if you have a journal only for friends? If yes, couldyou make me your friend?

alliekatgal June 12 2006, 15:05:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm always happy to hear that someone has enjoyed several of my fics! My lj is open to anyone, but I'm happy to friend you back! I forget to check to see if someone new has friended me, so it's great that you mentioned that. If you liked Forgotten Encounter, you may enjoy stories by alisanne and betsanne as some of them have a similar flavor. Enjoy!

taipa24 June 12 2006, 15:51:19 UTC

Thank you for friending me! I read before betsanne but I never heard of alisanne. I will have to look for her;D Thanks again.

knightmare_shad June 16 2006, 01:30:54 UTC

*wails* I'm not on enough to catch these when they're posted! Damn! I'm missing the good stuff.

I love the road map comment, cause, hey *raises hand* me too. Everyone needs one with me, tho my hubby says I change channels on him.

:D Very nice!

alliekatgal June 16 2006, 03:32:14 UTC

Thank you! I rarely post stories to snape_potter, although I always read whatever has been posted. My grandfather was someone who carried on that type of distracted conversation, where you had really pay attention because his mind would make these jumps and you'd have to work to make the connection. Glad you liked this!