So Long, Farewell

[allthatjazz817]

High in a tower
A maiden sits alone
Looking out
At the sad world below
Its sorrows reflected
In her pale face
Her hand reaches out
And grasps only space
She holds the keys
But she can’t reach the lock
The soft breeze on her face
Serves only to mock
As it whispers of a world
Beyond her finger tips
That she can only watch
Past her tower it slips
Alone, looking down

Comments

<3

[clovergirl409]

who's that poem by? I really liked it! if you wrote it you are officially way to talented to be 15. hmm im trying to think of something meaningiful to say for you to think about lol but i cant. ok im gonna go think......
i hate the way our high school is set up ( ok lot of thinking for a very obvious conclusion! lol well thats my big thing for you to think over)

<3 have fun! i love u
Kait

Re: <3

[allthatjazz817]

hey!!! i wanted to call u but i dont have your phone # and furthermore the computer is screwed and wont let me read ppl's ljs. but anyways, i'm in canada. i'm glad you liked my poem. canada is pretty cool, even though i still haven't been kissed :/ and...yeah, emotional stuff and cliquiness and everything i hate...but good besides that. i'll show you pictures. hope something interesting happened for u to tell me about. see ya in a week.
luv ya so much

[clovergirl409]

hey its me again sry i think im dislexic and i read ur paragraph underneath the poem wrong lol OMG YOU WROTE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS FUCKING AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGG ALANA U NEED TO LIKE GO GET PUBLISHED ITS LIKE MY PAFVORITE POEM NOW AND U WROTE IT AND WOW!!!!
ok so yes i appreciated the poem !

[danceluv123]

aww...i'll miss you sooo much while you're gone, and i'm so sorry we havent' gotten together yet, i feel so bad about it...maybe when you come home? we'll talk i'm sure...and happy early biirthday, though i dunno when you will get htis, but i cna't believe you will be 16!!!! yay! (i guess...unless you are lik eme, and dont' wanna turn 16...hehe) ok i'll stop now, lol, love ya tons *mwah* and *hugs to last till school starts!*

[allthatjazz817]

umm i only have 1:45 left on my computer time but i loveu and miss u and hugs til school starts and pink vanilla condoms as well. lol. heart heart heart heart. we'll do something soon. love u more than dean does and u know it!!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!

[anonymous]

hey!!! i hope ur havin fun in canadia!! n hav a very very very happy birthday cuz u deserve the bestest one ever!! and when u come back u can drive... WOWZERS!! have a blast n a half n gimme a call when u get back n we can go party... losers style... n yes u r gona get kissed soon so always keep a few tic tacs around (i saw another flying pig at target)...ok now i must end this 2 go shoot some balls.. i dono how many of them r out there tho.. prob not six... o well 2 should b enuf 2 play wit cuz i only hav 2 hands... *luv*
~Catherine

[anonymous]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ALANA!!! :)
-dina