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allzugern

Fic Update - SV

Jan 07, 2006 12:27

Comments 18

enderwiggin24 January 7 2006, 22:01:58 UTC

hi allzugern

just a short advise, since I have a number of friends, who are avid clex readers, but from whom I know are not watching alien_desires but rather have on their f-list sv_fanfic, you might consider to also cross-post it there.

so far, I like your story, very detailed, very mysterious, and well plotted, and dealing in a rather realistic way with clarks fears about his origins.

allzugern January 7 2006, 22:19:44 UTC

Thanks, I will check out sv_fanfic! I usually write HP fic so I am not too familiar with all the SV sites.My beta is the one who suggested alien_desires

Also, thank you for your feed-back. It means a great deal to know if the story is working or not for the reader. I am glad you are enjoying it:-)

teot January 8 2006, 04:54:26 UTC

I enjoyed this and I'm totally hooked now. This has a lot of the same elements of many alien!Clark stories, but you've got parts here that have me very intrigued. Why the hell would Clark *bite* Lex? And I can't wait to find out what the ship told Clark, either.

I'm going to friend you to keep track of updates. Glad to have you writing SV!

allzugern January 8 2006, 11:26:23 UTC

YAY! I am so glad you are enjoying the story. It has been a long time in the works.

Why the hell would Clark *bite* Lex?

Well, there is more to that bite than meets the eye! *g*

I'm going to friend you to keep track of updates

Feel free! I am committing to a chapter about every two weeks. The next couple of chapters under the new title will have a good deal of exposition so will be somewhat longer and take more time to beta and edit.

Thanks so much for your comments, feed back really helps me to see how the fic is working for the reader and it is a great motivator :-))

astreetelf January 8 2006, 15:05:28 UTC

Followed a rec to this from hrdo2ca and just thought I'd let you know that I'm really intrigued by your story and can't wait to see more.

Hope you don't mind me friending you? ;D

astreetelf January 8 2006, 15:07:53 UTC

And I can't type - it's hrd02ca, obviously.

allzugern January 8 2006, 18:06:45 UTC

I am glad you have enjoyed it so far! It's hard to tell sometimes if I am hitting the mark or not. skuf is doing the beta and she has been really good about keeping me on track as well as motivated.

Thanks so much for taking the time to give feed back, and I certainly don t mind being friended! A note though, I don't friend eveyone back because I assume you are here for fic updates and I don t lock those posts. Posts I tend to lock are private babbling and HP babbling. If those interest you as well, just let me know and I will friend you back :-)

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allzugern January 8 2006, 19:59:19 UTC

Heh, I hope I end-up going where you think I am :-P It'd be a wrench if you end-up being disappointed!

I'm 2.5k words into the next part and it is looking like it will be double that. I may actually send it to you in sections. So much exposition and so many ways to do it...

*Randomly smooches you*

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allzugern January 9 2006, 11:12:46 UTC

HAHAHAHA!

No, no death fic for me :-P

oh ayu1126 January 9 2006, 08:58:00 UTC

did i tell u I like ur stories?
I am just wondering why Clark "bite" Lex?
A special mark for mate?

keep writing.

ayu1126

Re: oh allzugern January 9 2006, 10:47:11 UTC

No, but you did now so thank you very much :-)

That bite will be mentioned again soon in the story *g*

Thanks for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate it!