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aloysiavirgata

The Very Edges Of Where We Take Shape

Jul 12, 2009 20:46

SUMMARY: He wasn't in love with her, not yet, but he was perilously close and knew it.

PAIRING: Adama/Roslin

RATING: PG-13

SPOILERS: Unfinished Business

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adama/roslin, fanfic:bsg

Comments 62

tjonesy July 13 2009, 01:21:11 UTC

Your use of language in this story is breathtakingly gorgeous. I love the tone of this fic, the stunning laziness of it is mesmerizing in its lushness. I think you've captured a perfect moment here between these two characters and you write them both beautifully.

This has really whet my appetite for more stories from you. I hope you'll oblige, and soon.

dashakay July 13 2009, 02:06:35 UTC

Don't worry, hon. I'm on it. I am aloysiavirgata's personal A/R pimp. ;-)

tjonesy July 13 2009, 02:23:14 UTC

You're doing a great job already! Thanks (((Dasha)))

aloysiavirgata July 13 2009, 11:15:50 UTC

Thank you so much for this! I've always been a fan of character studies and little "missing piece" stories, and this time period was just irresistible. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it so much.

ex_signmypa July 13 2009, 03:00:05 UTC

Absolutely gorgeous; vivid in its own simplicity. I loved the pace and your animated use of language, something so vacant in fanfiction.

I'm so glad you wrote this since it redeemed some semblance of hope in the fandom. You captured an image and portrayed it eloquently into language.

-Garbo

aloysiavirgata July 13 2009, 11:22:09 UTC

What a lovely thing to say! This fandom is truly overwhelming its scope, and I sort of wrote this in a vacuum. Hearing it touched on something that isn't a hackneyed cliche feels like a stroke of luck. *laugh*

danceswithcows1 July 13 2009, 03:09:08 UTC

Very nice. I found the balance between description and dialogue to be right on and you voiced both characters perfectly. It truly felt like it could be additional scenes for UB.

aloysiavirgata July 13 2009, 11:29:09 UTC

Excellent! I just loved Unfinished Business so much the first time I saw it that I couldn't help but let it be the basis for my first A/R fic.

meryl_edan July 13 2009, 03:12:01 UTC

This was beautiful. I'm in a bit of shock right now, actually; I'm sitting here in a delicious stunned stupor. I'll simply second tjonesy's comments and add my own request for more from you soon!

Thank you for this. Really well done.

aloysiavirgata July 13 2009, 11:31:37 UTC

Aw, you gu-uuys! *laugh*

Seriously though, thank you so much. I'm so happy that people have enjoyed it.

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aloysiavirgata July 13 2009, 11:32:14 UTC

Yay! Thanks very much. (I want to party with your icon.)