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scarletbaldy February 2 2010, 21:21:04 UTC
Looking Good. :)

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aloysiavirgata February 2 2010, 22:36:55 UTC
Thanks again for the beta and the dust jacket.

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stjudesshipper February 2 2010, 21:37:37 UTC
Hot DAMN, this was a treat to read. Your prose is thoughtful and clever and sharp while still being erotic as hell.
Also,
She'd always suspected he'd drive her insane one day, but she hadn't foreseen it going quite like this.
just about made my day. Thanks for posting!

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aloysiavirgata February 2 2010, 22:37:59 UTC
Well thanks very much! I'm so glad you liked it and found thoughtful even though it's smutty. That's hard to get right sometimes, and I always worry.

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hankmoodyblues February 2 2010, 21:45:14 UTC
Now this is what should have happened!

He follows her to the hallway, which makes her nervous. Scully is not an airer of dirty laundry. There's no real fight left in her, but it's still unseemly to continue this in a communal space full of peepholes. They argue in corners, in basements, in quiet apartments and anonymous cars on endless highways. He's from good New England stock and should be genetically predisposed towards circumspection.

Sorry to quote all that but I think it's absolutely brilliant.

She's a pathologist. She deals best with aftermath.

And this, too.

Love it!

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aloysiavirgata February 2 2010, 22:38:43 UTC
What a sweetheart you are! Thank you so much for taking the time to share bits you really liked. That means a lot to me.

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namarie24 February 2 2010, 21:52:52 UTC
Ohh, wow. This is excellent! So very excellent. I love your exploration of what we did see in FTF, and the seamlessness of what you added.

And Mulder totally would have opened the container.

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aloysiavirgata February 2 2010, 22:40:37 UTC
I am much obliged, thank you! Missing scenes - especially AU missing scenes - can feel clumsy at times so it's gratifying to know you think it was a smooth transition.

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christine_leigh February 2 2010, 22:12:42 UTC
This is just about perfect. Loved it. Thanks so much.

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aloysiavirgata February 2 2010, 22:41:01 UTC
And thank you! So pleased you liked it.

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