Comments | alpha_hydra: How We Are (but not how we're going to be) Part 5

alpha_hydra

How We Are (but not how we're going to be) Part 5

Nov 01, 2011 16:27

( [part six] )

[fic] kirk/spock, hwr, star trek goodness!!, [fic] startrek(reboot), star trek big bang

Comments 42

alienass November 5 2011, 11:51:40 UTC

I really loved reading this! I prefer fics with slow-building relationships like yours, so this was really great :) I also find the idea of them being in love with each other and not getting on well at the same time very interesting. It really works with them! Also I really liked how they didn’t understand each other, taking offense in things that the other didn’t say in that way. Really well done, I really love it!

alpha_hydra November 14 2011, 06:04:21 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you liked all the miss-communication :D

pegasus_01 November 5 2011, 15:41:15 UTC

AWESOME!!!! These are my favorite types of stories -- the slow build up and the hovering and the miscommunication. I kept seeing hints of other stories I've read with the same premise along the way but how you approached the theme was different that it's a gem all on its own. I also loved that this was from Spock's POV. I have a lot of trouble writing Spock and his POV, so I have the greatest admiration for those who can :)
Now I want a remix of this fic now from Jim's POV!!!

Also, I think your beta might have left a little something behind when expressing the hotness of the sex scene:
Spock collapses atop Jim for a moment,alskjdf
(this made me laugh a lot, because that's how I felt after that scene but actually seeing it with the scene was just brilliant) :) :) :)

ermer00 November 5 2011, 16:56:30 UTC

I'm two seconds from going out but I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story and the way you dealt with the progression of their relationship. It was wonderfully done and was a brilliant read. :)

rogueangel1998 November 5 2011, 17:27:32 UTC

Okay, I have to admit that I never read Kirk/Spock stories. The idea just doesn't work for me. (Now, Chris/Zach is a whole 'nother story for some reason.) Still, I started reading and couldn't stop. As Spock would say, "I found this satisfying."

I liked that it was from Spock's POV and how it seemed to flow, the hints of Jim that confused him and the marriaged counselling. Now I want something from Jim's POV. ;-)

Thanks for a good read. -RA

illariy November 5 2011, 18:31:02 UTC

Oh, this was such an eventful and fun read. I like how you worked Miranda Jones into the story. Thank you very much for sharing. :D