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altarii

Imperfect

May 29, 2010 13:09

title: Imperfect
word count: 2100
pairing: Ang/Zack
summary: Zack wants just a little something more from his relationship with Angeal, but isn't even certain himself what that something is. Angeal just wants to make Zack happy.
warning: kind of awkward sex
Beta'd by makokitten

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Comments 20

ayuka86 May 29 2010, 18:35:16 UTC

OMG this was wonderful. It's rare to find a story like this. Thanks for sharing!

altarii May 29 2010, 19:18:40 UTC

Thank you. c:
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

shewhoflies May 29 2010, 20:22:34 UTC

Oooh. I like! It's very realistic awkward first-time sex. Thanks for writing!

altarii May 30 2010, 13:45:12 UTC

Thanks~ I'm glad you like it. c:

amarissia May 30 2010, 02:41:01 UTC

This is awesome! I love that the relationship develops so slowly and naturally, and I love their awkwardness. You've written them how they probably would be if yaoi was canon, rather than taking the eyes-meet-instant-love route. Original, and well-done. Thank you!

altarii May 30 2010, 13:45:51 UTC

Aw, thank you. I can't see them as a eyes-meet-instant-love type relationship... Angeal's got too much honor for that, y'know? :x
Glad you liked it!

giuseppe May 30 2010, 04:13:48 UTC

Ffff that was adorable. ♥ It was totally more real than anything I could have ever written - seemingly awkward, realistic, just...very real. Surprising that Angeal was willing to submit to that, but honestly, when I think about it, it's soooooo plausible. XD ♥ When I was reading, I was like, OH NOEZ GEAL'S GONNA CRUSH ZACKY... XD

Off to check out your other fics now~! :)

And by the way, for some reason as I was reading this, I found your layout very awesome. ♥ Thank you for the experience.

altarii May 30 2010, 13:50:11 UTC

I-I really barely have other fics. ._.

Oh phew. I'm glad it seems plausible, was a bit worried about thaat bit 'cause it never seems to happen. X3
Glad you enjoyed it! And thank you. c:

giuseppe May 30 2010, 23:12:43 UTC

Of course. ♥

And, that's fine. ^_^ A few good fics are better than a billion awful ones (that's my story right therrrr xD). I do hope you keep writing fanfiction, though, because you're a great writer. ♥

altarii May 31 2010, 01:27:34 UTC

Your icons are all so pretty! By the way. On a totally unrelated note.

Aw, thanks. :D ♥

sildil May 30 2010, 09:52:28 UTC

SO adorable and so realistic! I'd love a follow up one :)

altarii May 30 2010, 13:50:56 UTC

Thanks! :D
Maybe more Ang/Zack is in order~