Wherein it is proved that I have a very, very disturbing subconscious

Mar 09, 2008 15:05

Title: Her Strength
Author: Yours truly, Alter Ego
Summary: She had to be strong for her people, even though strong was the last thing she felt she was.
Pairing: Slight Sheppard/Weir
Rating: R for... really disturbing
Warnings: dark!fic, disturbing imagery, torture, mutilation, death of an OC, did I mention dark?
Word Count: ~800
A/N: I am really, really ( Read more... )

dark!fic, elizabeth, fic

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meridith_smith March 10 2008, 00:18:11 UTC
I HATE U! I AM EMOTIONALLY SCARRED FOR LIFE! THIS IS EVEN MORE TRAUMATIZING THAN CARE BEARS PR0N. CARE BEARS PR0N IS LESS DEVASTATING. YOU HEAR ME?!?

Even if the story is completely awesome in a really awesomely dark, creepy manner. *eyes you*

And if Elizabeth comes to John's bed that night, crawls in between the sheets and cries for hours into his chest, finally falling asleep to the sound of his voice as he murmurs a mantra of Shh, it's okay, everything is going to be alright - no one is any the wiser.

*sniff* You get an A++++. Because this is fantastic. Even if you are evil. ;)

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alternate0ego March 10 2008, 17:56:24 UTC
Oh, excellent. I love scarring people for life. <3

I've mentioned how I love that icon, right? Cuz it is awesome. XD

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comanche_rider March 10 2008, 00:20:32 UTC
Dude. That was hardcore. Very dark and emotional. Though I was a little grossed out by the eyes and tongue bit. Love the last part - cuddly, reassuring John is sweeeeet.

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alternate0ego March 10 2008, 17:58:26 UTC
Thank you! Ha, you were grossed out? I was DISTURBED. And I'm the one who wrote it. Sometimes I scare myself...

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lilyoftheval5 March 10 2008, 08:26:45 UTC
'Hardcore' is the good word. I liked it very much, it appealed to me with the emotions it evoked. Nice job.

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alternate0ego March 10 2008, 17:59:19 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it, hardcore aside... ^_^

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justhere1971 March 10 2008, 12:42:32 UTC
I love it. I know Elizabeth is strong, I just never thought of her as capable of killing. Yet within this, it's completely believable. The slight touch of sparky is perfect!

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alternate0ego March 10 2008, 18:02:36 UTC
Thanks! Glad I, ah, made it all believable for you. ^_^

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