In one of my education classes we are studying poetry and yesterday we were required to revise a poem we had previously written. We only had 7 minutes to revise our poem as this exercise, but I really like what I did with the poem
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I had a long hiatus in the whole poetry writing business, but I really like writing poetry so...I'm back. Enjoy my poems, feel free to comment whether you like my poem or not [constructive criticism always helps], and if you want to read my non-poetry journal entries check culive2ride.livejournal.com
i wake up to see nothing but you, your eyelids lightly flutter as i shift positions in bed. i wake up warm and naked with your arm holding me close. to savour this moment forever, i slowly let my eyes close and my mind secretly ponders ideas of what our future together could hold.