Fic: The Light That Shines Behind Your Eyes (JMxSH) NC-17, TW - Part 3

[am_hatescaptcha]

The Light That Shines Behind Your Eyes
By AnonyMouseHatesCaptcha

Rated: NC-17 (overall)
Spoilers: TRF
Pairings/Characters (overall): Moriarty/Sherlock, John, Mycroft, Sebastian Moran

Warnings: Non-con, violence, language.

Summary: Sequel to "Stop Crying Your Heart Out". Set after the fall. Moriarty is alive and he's determined to keep Sherlock

Comments

[mjartrod]

OMG.
Does he have Moran thinking he really DID invent Moriarty? And that *he*, Sherlock Holmes has actually beeen the one pulling the strings all along??? :o

The blog? Perfect John Watson!!
The anniversary scene? God, Moriarty is always so creepy. And the comment he left on the blog? He'd totally do something like that, leaving mock support.
The third person? Who is he talking about, himself?

This story is fantastic. Please post more soon lol

[am_hatescaptcha]

Sherlock is a TROLOLOLOLOL. Hahahahaha I'm loving it.
But seriously, if anyone could pull this sort of thing off, it'd be Sherlock, right?? And it's all Jim's damn fault - he laid the groundwork for him. I almost feel BAD for taking Moran away from Moriarty, but then I remember what he did, and I stop feeling bad and start feeling vengeful. I think at this point I'm thinking from Sherlock's POV. He LIKES Moran, despite himself, he remind him a bit of John. Sherlock is a little messed up now, he knows it, he works around it, but he's still messed up.

Jim is a creepy creepy creepy and I always feel like I need to take a shower after writing about him.

The third person, spoilers, but yes, you've got it. Like I said, Sherlock's a bit messed up now :(

Next part coming as soon as possible. Hang in there.
Thanks for your feedback, you always cheer me up like nothing else <3 <3 <3

[mjartrod]

Ha! Who wouldn't be messed up after doing what he has to do and for three bloody years? He's been doing pretty well regardless lol And if anyone can plan revenge/someone's downfall... ;)

Moriarty deserves everything Sherlock may throw at him, btw. Looking forward to it.

And I'm glad you like the feedback :) I think the story is brilliant. You have an evil mind, everything feels quite in character - and you can plot! What's not to love? :D

[am_hatescaptcha]

*long overdue reply is long overdue*

Evil mind, eh? You might be right, I have a strange urge to cackle madly and pet a cat.

I just finished part 4 and sent it to be Beta'd, so it'll be coming soon. It's waaaay longer than I thought it will be, heh.

[legion11]

OMG!
Three years!
Who is the third person? What is his plan to Moran? How....
Please, please, PLEASE, continue soon!

[am_hatescaptcha]

:D

I'm glad you're enjoying, next part is coming up real soon!

[stupid_drawings]

Silly Moran, don't mess with Sherlock Holmes.

[am_hatescaptcha]

Sherlock Effing Holmes, ladies and gentlemen ^_^

[stupid_drawings]

:D
He will mind-fuck the sanity out of you!

[fantomeq]

Oh John! *Sniffles* A human heart is of course the best gift for Sherlock. LOVED Moriarty posting on the blog. Holy crap, he fooled Moran? I can't wait to see how this resolves.

[am_hatescaptcha]

John <3 I almost feel like I sully him, bringing him into this story.
A human heart, better than chocolate! The more you know <3

My headcanon (and also canon) says Moran is frightfully devoted to Moriarty. Imagine, now he thinks Sherlock IS Moriarty. I almost feel bad for Jim, but then I remember what a creepy he is.

Thanks for your feedback, I hope to get the next part out soon!

[missilemuse]

Can't wait to see John's reaction when he realises what Sherlock had to endure.

I wish Jim dies a slow, prolonged , painful and torturous death. Please don't make us wait too long for the next part.

[am_hatescaptcha]

I hope to get the next part out soon. Thanks for your feedback, I'm so glad you're enjying it <3